I agree with Ann.
Rick
> On Oct 19, 2018, at 10:31 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
>
> here we go ..
>
> much improvement with temperture and sharpness-- I actually find the
> background that Pj wants to pare down the best aspect of the photo.. I like
> the pattern and color... my personal pref
here we go ..
much improvement with temperture and sharpness-- I actually find the
background that Pj wants to pare down the best aspect of the photo.. I
like the pattern and color... my personal pref with the elephant is
lower left... but not a square crop, as one of your fixes was.
and
Ah, the PDML is getting into it's stride again! (Are you listening, Dan?).
I actually saw the whole image as a kind of abstract but I suppose there
are different ways of looking at it.
I'll try it your way, PJ
Alan C
On 19-Oct-18 03:50 PM, P. J. Alling wrote:
Well I have a nit.
Mostly
Since "He" is facing right, I would not
limit his view to the right.
Would be visually awkward to me.
J
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> On Oct 19, 2018, at 6:50 AM, P. J. Alling wrote:
>
> Well I have a nit.
>
> Mostly that big boy doesn't look so big. He kind of gets lost in the
> landscape, and the
Well I have a nit.
Mostly that big boy doesn't look so big. He kind of gets lost in the
landscape, and the trees.
I know you intended to show his environment, and it's good to show him
in his environment, but the upper third of the frame doesn't really
add to the story, and the right
Agree that the scene is somewhat
sharper with noticeably less glare.
Still like this scene with the Tusker
placed just slightly left of center.
J
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> On Oct 18, 2018, at 9:18 PM, Alan Cole wrote:
>
> I altered the temperature (Larry) & sharpened the image (Ann). I think it
>
Yup, the highlights ate not nearly do blown out, much better
On October 18, 2018 9:18:15 PM PDT, Alan Cole wrote:
>I altered the temperature (Larry) & sharpened the image (Ann). I think
>it
>looks better now. The Elephant was very pale (sun bleached).
>
I altered the temperature (Larry) & sharpened the image (Ann). I think it
looks better now. The Elephant was very pale (sun bleached).
https://www.flickr.com/photos/wisselstroom/45420596741/
Alan C
On Thu, Oct 18, 2018 at 9:17 PM ann sanfedele wrote:
> The colors and shapes in the dry
The colors and shapes in the dry vegetation are interesting, but the
real problem with the shot is that nothing is sharp. The elephant is
burnt out,
he appears white on myscreen.. lots of ways you can get interesting
geometry out of this, but the blur - especially in the foreground is
hard
OK, Larry - here it is - Rule of Thirds!
https://www.flickr.com/photos/wisselstroom/44490136335/
Alan C
On 18-Oct-18 11:47 AM, Larry Colen wrote:
Alan C wrote on 10/18/18 12:35 AM:
An Old Big Tusker searching for sustenance in a dry landscape.
Phalaborwa/Shingwedzi Road, Kruger Park.
We
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