Steve, I don't think it is too successful a shot as it is presented.
In no particular order:
* The object in the bottom right corner is distracting.
* At the top right corner there is something (branches of another tree?)
that overlap the branches of /the/ tree in rather distracting manner.
*
No offense taken. The whole point of this exercise is to get
constructive criticism. One thing I've realized recently is that
sometimes I like something very different from others when I am
looking at the PESOs. This means that how my judgement plays out in
my own shots might not be agreeable
Here's a version withe the distractions cloned out:
http://s857.photobucket.com/albums/ab138/drd1135/PDML/?action=viewcurrent=tree2.jpg
On Tue, Oct 26, 2010 at 9:58 AM, Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com wrote:
No offense taken. The whole point of this exercise is to get
constructive
On 10/26/2010 4:11 PM, Steven Desjardins wrote:
Here's a version withe the distractions cloned out:
http://s857.photobucket.com/albums/ab138/drd1135/PDML/?action=viewcurrent=tree2.jpg
To my eye it looks significantly better than the original. I appreciate
the fact that you understood my
Exceptionally well composed and rendered, Steven!
Jack
--- On Mon, 10/25/10, Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com wrote:
From: Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com
Subject: PESO: First tree of winter
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Date: Monday, October 25, 2010, 8:29 AM
This is
I like that image very much. Great sky, and great patterns in the branches.
Dan
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On Mon, Oct 25, 2010 at 11:29 AM, Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com wrote:
This is one of those scenes you encounter on a walk. It's a great
combination of background and subject and
Well done.
Needs more snow.:-)
Dave
On Mon, Oct 25, 2010 at 11:29 AM, Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com wrote:
This is one of those scenes you encounter on a walk. It's a great
combination of background and subject and sky and it's never quite as
good in a photo as it was live. Here it
I'm working on my snow dance. I should have it down by January.
On Mon, Oct 25, 2010 at 2:00 PM, David J Brooks pentko...@gmail.com wrote:
Well done.
Needs more snow.:-)
Dave
On Mon, Oct 25, 2010 at 11:29 AM, Steven Desjardins drd1...@gmail.com wrote:
This is one of those scenes you
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