Fwd: Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)

[ann sanfedele]

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Subject:Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)
Date:   Wed, 6 Sep 2017 22:22:35 -0400
From:   ann sanfedele <ann...@nyc.rr.com>
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I like the slight crop and the shadow dodging, but prefer the brighter
exposure of the sunlit area...

ann

On 9/6/2017 9:39 PM, Rick Womer wrote:

In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping, pulled down 
the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows on the right a bit:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv

Improved?

Rick



On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen <l...@red4est.com> wrote:



Paul Stenquist wrote:

Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow doesn't work 
for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would undoubtedly help 
some.

I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom.


Paul via phone


On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer<rickpic...@gmail.com>  wrote:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A

(K-5, DA 50-200)

Comments cordially invited.

Rick

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Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)

[lrc]

On September 6, 2017 6:39:35 PM PDT, Rick Womer  wrote:
>In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping,
>pulled down the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows
>on the right a bit:
>
>https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv
>
>Improved?

Yes.
>
>Rick
>
>
>> On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen  wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Paul Stenquist wrote:
>>> Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow
>doesn't work for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would
>undoubtedly help some.
>> 
>> I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom.
>> 
>>> 
>>> Paul via phone
>>> 
 On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer 
>wrote:
 
 https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A
 
 (K-5, DA 50-200)
 
 Comments cordially invited.
 
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Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)

[Paul Stenquist]

I think it's improved. Still not one of your best, but better and interesting.

Paul via phone

> On Sep 6, 2017, at 9:39 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
> In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping, pulled 
> down the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows on the right a 
> bit:
> 
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv
> 
> Improved?
> 
> Rick
> 
> 
>> On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen  wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Paul Stenquist wrote:
>>> Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow doesn't 
>>> work for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would undoubtedly 
>>> help some.
>> 
>> I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom.
>> 
>>> 
>>> Paul via phone
>>> 
 On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
 
 https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A
 
 (K-5, DA 50-200)
 
 Comments cordially invited.
 
 Rick
 
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Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)

[Jack Davis]

Think I prefer the second and
slightly darker image. The brighter
image looses a small bit of detail
in the lighter bloom.

J



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> On Sep 6, 2017, at 6:39 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
> 
> In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping, pulled 
> down the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows on the right a 
> bit:
> 
> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv
> 
> Improved?
> 
> Rick
> 
> 
>> On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen  wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Paul Stenquist wrote:
>>> Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow doesn't 
>>> work for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would undoubtedly 
>>> help some.
>> 
>> I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom.
>> 
>>> 
>>> Paul via phone
>>> 
 On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
 
 https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A
 
 (K-5, DA 50-200)
 
 Comments cordially invited.
 
 Rick
 
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Re: PESO - Quiet Evening on the Pond (revised)

[Rick Womer]

In response to Larry’s and Paul’s suggestions, I did some cropping, pulled down 
the exposure of most of the scene, and dodged the shadows on the right a bit:

https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/organize/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv

Improved?

Rick


> On Sep 5, 2017, at 9:18 PM, Larry Colen  wrote:
> 
> 
> 
> Paul Stenquist wrote:
>> Nice on the left side of frame, but the huge impenetrable shadow doesn't 
>> work for me. HDR or pulling up shadow detail in PS levels would undoubtedly 
>> help some.
> 
> I mostly agree, I'd just crop about 15% off the right and bottom.
> 
>> 
>> Paul via phone
>> 
>>> On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:34 PM, Rick Womer  wrote:
>>> 
>>> https://rickwomer.smugmug.com/PESOs-2017/Sabbaday-Falls/i-crQNhnv/A
>>> 
>>> (K-5, DA 50-200)
>>> 
>>> Comments cordially invited.
>>> 
>>> Rick
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