improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands, OSX is now macOS, Rufus
with dd mode is preferred to etcher
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
pve-usbstick.adoc | 109 +++---
1 file changed, 54 insertions(+), 55
This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The
main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent.
Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the
ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80
characters per line
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
v1 -> v2:
applied suggestions from oguz [0]
[0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038965.html
system-software-updates.adoc | 25
improve phrasing
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v3 -> v4:
fixed UTF-8 dots
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
v1 -> v2:
applied suggestion from oguz [0]
[0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038952.html
translation.adoc | 37 +++--
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
pve-package-repos.adoc | 143 +
1 file changed, 74 insertions(+), 69 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
getting-help.adoc| 9 -
howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc | 4 ++--
pve-installation.adoc| 14 +++---
pve-package-repos.adoc | 11 +--
pve-system-requirements.adoc | 4 ++--
improve phrasing, align headlines, rearrange requirement lists
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v3 -> v4:
rephrased OS storage and NIC requirements to be more specific
aligned third level headlines to sentence style to conform to style
guide
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
v1 -> v2:
improve phrasing
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
v2 -> v3:
rebased on current master
v1 -> v2:
applied suggestions from oguz [0]
[0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038966.html
sysadmin.adoc | 38 ++
1 file changed, 14
improve phrasing, align style of CLI commands
Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer
---
Please use this patch instead. I forgot to incorporate some changes.
v4 -> v5: actually incroporate reported issues
pve-package-repos.adoc | 143 +
1 file changed, 74
On 2/11/20 9:26 AM, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> "PVE Cluster Resource Manager Daemon" should be "PVE Cluster HA Resource
> Manager Daemon"
>
> [0]: https://forum.proxmox.com/threads/typo-omission.65107/
>
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas
> ---
> debian/pve-ha-crm.service | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1
the verification textfield, and the selected tab.
also remove the code that used the value by the userview panel, since
this is the only way to have a consistent behaviour on the userview
setting and the usermenu tfa setting
this fixes the issue that on the 'user menu' we accidentally showed
the
setting the loadmask did not really work, so show a messagebox instead
and close the window
Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak
---
new in v2
www/manager6/dc/TFAEdit.js | 3 ++-
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/www/manager6/dc/TFAEdit.js b/www/manager6/dc/TFAEdit.js
index
"PVE Cluster Resource Manager Daemon" should be "PVE Cluster HA Resource
Manager Daemon"
[0]: https://forum.proxmox.com/threads/typo-omission.65107/
Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas
---
debian/pve-ha-crm.service | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git
On 2/11/20 9:55 AM, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The
> main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent.
> Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the
> ordering of content as well. I tried to
On 2/11/20 10:01 AM, Dominik Csapak wrote:
> the verification textfield, and the selected tab.
>
> also remove the code that used the value by the userview panel, since
> this is the only way to have a consistent behaviour on the userview
> setting and the usermenu tfa setting
>
> this fixes the
On 2/11/20 10:01 AM, Dominik Csapak wrote:
> setting the loadmask did not really work, so show a messagebox instead
> and close the window
>
> Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak
> ---
> new in v2
> www/manager6/dc/TFAEdit.js | 3 ++-
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git
On 2/10/20 5:26 PM, Alexandre Derumier wrote:
> This patch series remove the uplink-id option for vlan|qinq plugin,
> and now use "bridge" options.
>
> This will use an already local vmbr defined bridge.
> This is working with vlan-aware bridge and also ovs bridge.
>
>
> Alexandre Derumier (7):
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