Re: Review Request 22697: Documenting SLA stats.

2014-06-25 Thread Bill Farner

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Ship it!


Ship It!

- Bill Farner


On June 25, 2014, 4:48 p.m., Maxim Khutornenko wrote:
 
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 (Updated June 25, 2014, 4:48 p.m.)
 
 
 Review request for Aurora.
 
 
 Bugs: AURORA-528
 https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AURORA-528
 
 
 Repository: aurora
 
 
 Description
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 Documenting SLA stats.
 
 
 Diffs
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   docs/sla.md PRE-CREATION 
 
 Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/
 
 
 Testing
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 Thanks,
 
 Maxim Khutornenko
 




Re: Review Request 22697: Documenting SLA stats.

2014-06-25 Thread Joe Smith

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Ship it!


Awesome, thanks Maxim!


docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment82214

This is a purely



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment82215

that helps track


- Joe Smith


On June 25, 2014, 9:48 a.m., Maxim Khutornenko wrote:
 
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 (Updated June 25, 2014, 9:48 a.m.)
 
 
 Review request for Aurora.
 
 
 Bugs: AURORA-528
 https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AURORA-528
 
 
 Repository: aurora
 
 
 Description
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 Documenting SLA stats.
 
 
 Diffs
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   docs/sla.md PRE-CREATION 
 
 Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/
 
 
 Testing
 ---
 
 
 Thanks,
 
 Maxim Khutornenko
 




Re: Review Request 22697: Documenting SLA stats.

2014-06-25 Thread Maxim Khutornenko


 On June 25, 2014, 7:26 p.m., Joe Smith wrote:
  docs/sla.md, line 82
  https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/2/?file=617031#file617031line82
 
  This is a purely

Done.


 On June 25, 2014, 7:26 p.m., Joe Smith wrote:
  docs/sla.md, line 102
  https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/2/?file=617031#file617031line102
 
  that helps track

Done.


- Maxim


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On June 25, 2014, 4:48 p.m., Maxim Khutornenko wrote:
 
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 (Updated June 25, 2014, 4:48 p.m.)
 
 
 Review request for Aurora.
 
 
 Bugs: AURORA-528
 https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AURORA-528
 
 
 Repository: aurora
 
 
 Description
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 Documenting SLA stats.
 
 
 Diffs
 -
 
   docs/sla.md PRE-CREATION 
 
 Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/
 
 
 Testing
 ---
 
 
 Thanks,
 
 Maxim Khutornenko
 




Re: Review Request 22697: Documenting SLA stats.

2014-06-23 Thread Bill Farner

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Overall the content looks good and thorough.  Can you push a branch to github 
and link to it in the review description?  This way we can have a preview of 
the rendering.


docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81827

How about Aurora SLA Measurement?  Given that this works above a job, 
broadened scope seems like a good idea.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81829

Might want to eschew discussion of implementation details a bit.  How about 
Counters that track SLA measurements are computed periodically within the 
scheduler.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81830

s/core //?



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81831

Before this, a bit of prose about how we detect platform unavailability 
would be useful.  i.e. it's a red flag that the term LOST does not appear in 
the document.  It's good that you link to the source of truth 
(SlaAlgorithm.java), but a sentence or two about mesos and LOST status would 
fill in a big contextual blank.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81832

Nit: a user can indirectly cause service downtime when their application 
exits.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81828

You can actually link directly to the source path for simpler discovery.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81833

s/Average/Median/

s/get host-assigned/be assigned to a host/
s/A combined/This is a combined/



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81834

Rewording:
job scheduling performance dependency

to

the dependency of scheduling performance



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81835

Please link to the source defining these sizes.



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81836

s/The //



docs/sla.md
https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/#comment81837

s/Average/Median/


- Bill Farner


On June 17, 2014, 9:14 p.m., Maxim Khutornenko wrote:
 
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 (Updated June 17, 2014, 9:14 p.m.)
 
 
 Review request for Aurora.
 
 
 Bugs: AURORA-528
 https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AURORA-528
 
 
 Repository: aurora
 
 
 Description
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 Documenting SLA stats.
 
 
 Diffs
 -
 
   docs/sla.md PRE-CREATION 
 
 Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/
 
 
 Testing
 ---
 
 
 Thanks,
 
 Maxim Khutornenko
 




Re: Review Request 22697: Documenting SLA stats.

2014-06-20 Thread Maxim Khutornenko

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Anyone?

- Maxim Khutornenko


On June 17, 2014, 9:14 p.m., Maxim Khutornenko wrote:
 
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 (Updated June 17, 2014, 9:14 p.m.)
 
 
 Review request for Aurora.
 
 
 Bugs: AURORA-528
 https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AURORA-528
 
 
 Repository: aurora
 
 
 Description
 ---
 
 Documenting SLA stats.
 
 
 Diffs
 -
 
   docs/sla.md PRE-CREATION 
 
 Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/22697/diff/
 
 
 Testing
 ---
 
 
 Thanks,
 
 Maxim Khutornenko