Subject: Re: Comments from additional review
Linda,
The first word of the chosen sentence should be "One", not "On".
Bill
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Thank you. I will consider saying something about he key management in
BESS, although I participate there only very lightly.
With regard to 3
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Subject: Re: Comments from additional review
Thank you. I will consider saying something about he key management in BESS,
although I participate there only very lightly.
With reg
Thank you. I will consider saying something about he key management in
BESS, although I participate there only very lightly.
With regard to 3.7, the proposed sentence
/“//One of the concerns of //_enterprises_//using Cloud services is not
aware of where the resource is located//. //“/
is
Joel,
Thank you very much for the additional comments.
Resolutions to your comments are inserted below:
Linda
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