Re: [sig-policy] prop-133-v001: Secretariat impact assessment

2020-02-16 Thread JORDI PALET MARTINEZ
Hi Adam, Responding below, in-line. Regards, Jordi @jordipalet El 17/2/20 11:54, "Adam Gosling" escribió: Hi Jordi My comments are inline New version: 2.2.3. Assigned address space Assigned address space is address space that is delegated to an LIR, or end-user,

Re: [sig-policy] prop-133-v001: Secretariat impact assessment

2020-02-16 Thread Adam Gosling
Hi Jordi My comments are inline > > New version: > > 2.2.3. Assigned address space > Assigned address space is address space that is delegated to an LIR, or > end-user, for exclusive use within the infrastructure they operate. This is not simply clarifying the text. The existing text is

Re: [sig-policy] prop-133-v001: Secretariat impact assessment

2020-02-15 Thread Srinivas Chendi
Hi Jordi, Thanks for the new version. SIG Chairs will soon post version 2 of this proposal to the mailing list for community discussion. Regards Sunny On 16/02/2020 12:24 pm, JORDI PALET MARTINEZ wrote: > Hi Sunny, all, > > I agree that we can improve this removing the redundant text (as I've

Re: [sig-policy] prop-133-v001: Secretariat impact assessment

2020-02-15 Thread JORDI PALET MARTINEZ
Hi Sunny, all, I agree that we can improve this removing the redundant text (as I've added "exclusive" it is now clearly duplicating the meaning). So, I think we should make a new version using this "shortened" text: Actual: 2.2.3. Assigned address space Assigned address space is address