Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

t the document and re-edited the language > and grammar. [if - I’m still seeing some problems with the above two points. I’ll reply you directly on these] > > > Best regards, > > Mingwei > > > > 发件人： Ian Farrer > 发送时间： 2016-04-20 03:53:13 > 收件人： draft

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

rammar checking throughout. Answer: We have checked throughout the document and re-edited the language and grammar. Best regards, Mingwei 发件人： Ian Farrer 发送时间： 2016-04-20 03:53:13 收件人： draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast; softwires 抄送： 主题： Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

is not required. Cheers, Med De : Softwires [mailto:softwires-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Ian Farrer Envoyé : mardi 19 avril 2016 21:53 À : draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multic...@ietf.org; softwires@ietf.org Objet : Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast Hi, Here is my

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

('x' is any valid scope) == Thank you. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Softwires [mailto:softwires-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Ian > Farrer > Envoyé : jeudi 7 avril 2016 16:59 > À : softwires@ietf.org > Objet : [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

Hi, Ian, Thank you very much! We will modify the draft according to your valuable comments. Mingwei 2016-04-20 Mingwei Xu 发件人： Ian Farrer 发送时间： 2016-04-20 03:53:13 收件人： draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast; softwires 抄送： 主题： Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

Hi, Here is my review of the draft. Best regards, Ian Pg 5 - states a 'dual-stack' router. The AFBR is not really dual-stack here. It has two single stack interfaces and implements a transition technology. Suggest removal of dual-stack. Section 4.1 The translation between the IPv4 and IPv6

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

ires" <softwires-boun...@ietf.org> > > 2016/04/07 22:58 > > 收件人 > > softwires@ietf.org, > > 抄送 > > 主题 > > [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast > > Hi, > > This document has been around for some time, but has no

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

Dear All, I have reviewed the mesh multicast draft. In general, I think that this document is mature enough to move forward. Some minor mistakes of the draft: 1. In section 1 1. Introduction, there is no hyperlink for RFC4925; 2. In section 3.2 IPv6-over-IPv4, "IPv6 - to - IPv4 address

Re: [Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

Are there any implementations of this? Ole > On 07 Apr 2016, at 16:58, Ian Farrer wrote: > > Hi, > > This document has been around for some time, but has not received any > substantive reviews. Can I ask for volunteers who are willing to provide > reviews? > > Thanks, >

[Softwires] Call for reviewers draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

Hi, This document has been around for some time, but has not received any substantive reviews. Can I ask for volunteers who are willing to provide reviews? Thanks, Ian ___ Softwires mailing list Softwires@ietf.org