Hi Marvin,
Sorry, I missed the last round of reviews of your site - I'm guessing you've
posted it here on WSG previously?
There are a few things that I would do differently, but it's a fairly simple
site so they're not major issues. If the design was more complex with more
content and interaction then perhaps you might need to change things like
the navigation, header hierarchy visual priority - otherwise I think it's
fine.
If I were you I would stick to HTML instead of going with XHTML as you seem
to struggle with it; it still doesn't validate.
What do you hope to achieve with this site? I can't tell if you're trying to
push phone ordering or get people to your shop. You seem to be promoting the
phone number (and for the record I dislike 1800-CALL-ME style phone numbers;
takes longer to dial) more than the physical address of the shop. Unless
your target customer group are already aware of you one of the biggest
questions new users to the site will want answered is if you're relevant to
them and can provide them service. What area do you cover with phone orders?
Do you want to cover all of Australia? Do you get orders from the other side
of the country?
What's the purpose of your favourite links pages? I suggest you install a
web analytics package to see if anyone actually visits those pages. You
might want to consider linking to relevant recipes from your produce page
next to primary ingredients used in those recipes.
Hope that's helpful. If you want more help, you can contact me off-list. I'm
available for hire :)
Nathanael Boehm
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On Thu, Nov 12, 2009 at 9:19 AM, Marvin Hunkin startrekc...@gmail.comwrote:
hi.
well made quite a few changes.
and vallidated all pages.
and vallidates.
then got a sighted person to review my site.
now.
here'sthe current version and hopefully the final version.
now from a accessibility view point, and a layout and content viewpoint.
what do you think?
any feedback, good, bad, ugly.
but please be civil.
cheers Marvin.
http://www.raulferrer.com/joe/html/
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