RE: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
DP, I enjoyed all of these very much! They all communicate experience. There is no intrusion of the writer (no use of the pronoun 'I' or 'you' or 'they'. The last line on the last haiku has 6 syllables instead of 5, but other than that blip I think they're all VERY NICE! .Bill! From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of DP Sent: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 8:00 PM To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com Subject: Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? Here are a few of mine. Clouds claw at the sun blackgrey smothers the blue sky cool wind on the way. Halfway to the goal red shirt runs up to the post shrieks of victory. Pink helmet blue dress locking bicycle in place new age commuter. Rain falls on the ground everywhere in glossy pools good day to be a duck. --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> , wrote: > > DP, > > > > Occasionally, > > I put fingers to keyboard, > > And create Haiku. > > > > And you? Do you write? > > If so, would you share some poems? > > We would all like that. > > > > .Bill! > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> [mailto:Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> ] On Behalf > Of DP > Sent: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 8:37 AM > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > Subject: Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > Well, do you write any more? :) > > --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> , > wrote: > > > > Dave, > > > > > > > > First, five syllables, > > > > Second, seven syllables, > > > > Last line, five again. > > > > > > > > .Bill! > > > > > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > [mailto:Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> ] On > Behalf > > Of DP > > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM > > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > > > > > > > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a > > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding > > the right word. > > > > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects > like > > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. > > > > > > > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus > signature > > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > > > http://www.eset.com > > > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature database 5416 (20100901) __ The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. http://www.eset.com
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Most of these I wrote during my years as a stay at home parent. spring - heat off, no air sunny running, sweat again sleep with blowing cool Laughing falling smile wordless jokes cracking us up jump hide - where? ha ha! grow grow grow unseen mom is eating sleeping lots when is who coming? tiny wriggling blob wavy screen fluttering heart ultrasound thrills me one two three four five lots of beds for family still, so, so, sleepy sleeping, heavy babe cooing warms heart, calms baby what will his words be? Fallen, crying hurt Parent's old arms holding still Happy running feet giant belly sweating pushing exertion tiny peaceful life smile, little frog see my face - grab my finger now drink sleepily yelling no! Mine! Mine! Swinging arms scare other kids yelling hitting 2 lean air, bright leaves fall. Walking lightly, smiles for all. Life honors boldness. Longing for great truth, Feeling a sublime formless ... Bad words stick in mind. coats boots mittens too putting them on again. whew. Oh no! Time to pee. And for today: Ideas clashing hard! Typing with great heat to fix. Zen_Forum flows on. Ahh, the indulgence. Thanks, --Chris On Wed, Sep 1, 2010 at 5:59 AM, DP wrote: > Here are a few of mine. > > Clouds claw at the sun > blackgrey smothers the blue sky > cool wind on the way. > > Halfway to the goal > red shirt runs up to the post > shrieks of victory. > > Pink helmet blue dress > locking bicycle in place > new age commuter. > > Rain falls on the ground > everywhere in glossy pools > good day to be a duck. > > --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, wrote: >> >> DP, >> >> >> >> Occasionally, >> >> I put fingers to keyboard, >> >> And create Haiku. >> >> >> >> And you? Do you write? >> >> If so, would you share some poems? >> >> We would all like that. >> >> >> >> .Bill! >> >> >> >> From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf >> Of DP >> Sent: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 8:37 AM >> To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com >> Subject: Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? >> >> >> >> >> >> Well, do you write any more? :) >> >> --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> , >> wrote: >> > >> > Dave, >> > >> > >> > >> > First, five syllables, >> > >> > Second, seven syllables, >> > >> > Last line, five again. >> > >> > >> > >> > .Bill! >> > >> > >> > >> > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> >> [mailto:Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> ] On >> Behalf >> > Of DP >> > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM >> > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> >> > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a >> > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding >> > the right word. >> > >> > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects >> like >> > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus >> signature >> > database 5413 (20100831) __ >> > >> > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. >> > >> > http://www.eset.com >> > >> >> >> >> >> >> __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature >> database 5413 (20100831) __ >> >> The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. >> >> http://www.eset.com >> > > > > > > > Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are > reading! Talk about it today!Yahoo! Groups Links > > > > Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are reading! Talk about it today!Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: zen_forum-dig...@yahoogroups.com zen_forum-fullfeatu...@yahoogroups.com <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: zen_forum-unsubscr...@yahoogroups.com <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Here are a few of mine. Clouds claw at the sun blackgrey smothers the blue sky cool wind on the way. Halfway to the goal red shirt runs up to the post shrieks of victory. Pink helmet blue dress locking bicycle in place new age commuter. Rain falls on the ground everywhere in glossy pools good day to be a duck. --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, wrote: > > DP, > > > > Occasionally, > > I put fingers to keyboard, > > And create Haiku. > > > > And you? Do you write? > > If so, would you share some poems? > > We would all like that. > > > > .Bill! > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf > Of DP > Sent: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 8:37 AM > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com > Subject: Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > Well, do you write any more? :) > > --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> , > wrote: > > > > Dave, > > > > > > > > First, five syllables, > > > > Second, seven syllables, > > > > Last line, five again. > > > > > > > > .Bill! > > > > > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > [mailto:Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> ] On > Behalf > > Of DP > > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM > > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > > > > > > > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a > > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding > > the right word. > > > > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects > like > > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. > > > > > > > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus > signature > > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > > > http://www.eset.com > > > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are reading! Talk about it today!Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: zen_forum-dig...@yahoogroups.com zen_forum-fullfeatu...@yahoogroups.com <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: zen_forum-unsubscr...@yahoogroups.com <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Hi DP again: A THOUGHT TO YOU: I paste you here a very beautiful interpretation by Paco Ibanez a great Spanish Cantautor of Poetry and also amongst my favourites too!!!. The song is sang in the Vasque Language which it made even more sweet the performance. The tittle of this song : "Death will come and have your eyes" is a poem by the italian Pavesse who commited suicidal. Words are not important to be understood or not here instead of that if you let your sensitivity go in a way that you flow with the singer and music...You'll be enjoying very much. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvwpzHHzgGc --- On Tue, 31/8/10, DP wrote: From: DP Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com Date: Tuesday, 31 August, 2010, 15:45 I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding the right word. I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like nature and actions, rather than just using the form.
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Making up this one right now, though not sure if is a kaiku or what: >From the sea To the sea Here and Now fear is hugged. Mayka --- On Tue, 31/8/10, DP wrote: From: DP Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com Date: Tuesday, 31 August, 2010, 15:45 I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding the right word. I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like nature and actions, rather than just using the form.
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Awesome! Thanks, Chris Austin-Lane Sent from a cell phone On Aug 31, 2010, at 5:55 PM, wrote: > > > Dave, > > > > First, five syllables, > > Second, seven syllables, > > Last line, five again. > > > > …Bill! > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf > Of DP > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding > the right word. > > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > > >
RE: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
DP, Occasionally, I put fingers to keyboard, And create Haiku. And you? Do you write? If so, would you share some poems? We would all like that. .Bill! From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of DP Sent: Wednesday, September 01, 2010 8:37 AM To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com Subject: Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? Well, do you write any more? :) --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> , wrote: > > Dave, > > > > First, five syllables, > > Second, seven syllables, > > Last line, five again. > > > > .Bill! > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> [mailto:Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> ] On Behalf > Of DP > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com <mailto:Zen_Forum%40yahoogroups.com> > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding > the right word. > > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature database 5413 (20100831) __ The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. http://www.eset.com
Re: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Well, do you write any more? :) --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, wrote: > > Dave, > > > > First, five syllables, > > Second, seven syllables, > > Last line, five again. > > > > .Bill! > > > > From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf > Of DP > Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM > To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com > Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? > > > > > > I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a > kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding > the right word. > > I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like > nature and actions, rather than just using the form. > > > > > > __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature > database 5413 (20100831) __ > > The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. > > http://www.eset.com > Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are reading! Talk about it today!Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: zen_forum-dig...@yahoogroups.com zen_forum-fullfeatu...@yahoogroups.com <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: zen_forum-unsubscr...@yahoogroups.com <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
RE: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku?
Dave, First, five syllables, Second, seven syllables, Last line, five again. .Bill! From: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com [mailto:zen_fo...@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of DP Sent: Tuesday, August 31, 2010 9:46 PM To: Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com Subject: [Zen] Does anybody here write Haiku? I have been writing them for a few months. I've been writing since I was a kid, but I find Haiku so relaxing and illuminating, because I love finding the right word. I've been doing traditional Haiku, that is keeping them about subjects like nature and actions, rather than just using the form. __ Information from ESET NOD32 Antivirus, version of virus signature database 5413 (20100831) __ The message was checked by ESET NOD32 Antivirus. http://www.eset.com
