Some things I noticed: 1. In the first paragraph there is "Our The kernel offers" I think "The" is misplaced. 2. Afaik there are no ISO images yet but only floppy disk images. 3. The list of the kernel developers should be perhaps ordered alphabetically.
Chriss. Chriss. William Lahti wrote: > In a more formal tone: > > http://sharpos.org/redmine/wiki/3/Draft_M1_Announcement > > Comments and changes are again appreciated :) > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- This SF.net email is sponsored by: Microsoft Defy all challenges. Microsoft(R) Visual Studio 2005. http://clk.atdmt.com/MRT/go/vse0120000070mrt/direct/01/ _______________________________________________ SharpOS-Developers mailing list SharpOS-Developers@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/sharpos-developers
