On Dec 30, 2007 9:54 AM, Darx Kies <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Some things I noticed: > 1. In the first paragraph there is "Our The kernel offers" I think "The" > is misplaced.
Sorry my bad. It's actually the "Our" that is misplaced though, as press releases are supposed to be in third person (the idea is that the press can copy the press release verbatim if they please). > 2. Afaik there are no ISO images yet but only floppy disk images. I plan on putting together one for the release :) > 3. The list of the kernel developers should be perhaps ordered > alphabetically. Good idea. I have to jet for now but I'll be back right quick and I'll take care of these issues. Thanks Chriss! Oh, btw, for the article (not press release), would the proper form for your first name be Mircea, Cristian or perhaps Mircea-Cristian? Right now it says Mircea but it occurred to me that Cristian would make more sense. I know this sort of thing differs by culture. > > Chriss. > > Chriss. > > William Lahti wrote: > > In a more formal tone: > > > > http://sharpos.org/redmine/wiki/3/Draft_M1_Announcement > > > > Comments and changes are again appreciated :) > > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------- > This SF.net email is sponsored by: Microsoft > Defy all challenges. Microsoft(R) Visual Studio 2005. > http://clk.atdmt.com/MRT/go/vse0120000070mrt/direct/01/ > _______________________________________________ > SharpOS-Developers mailing list > SharpOS-Developers@lists.sourceforge.net > https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/sharpos-developers > -- fury long name: William Lahti handle :: fury freenode :: xfury blog :: http://xfurious.blogspot.com/ ------------------------------------------------------------------------- This SF.net email is sponsored by: Microsoft Defy all challenges. Microsoft(R) Visual Studio 2005. http://clk.atdmt.com/MRT/go/vse0120000070mrt/direct/01/ _______________________________________________ SharpOS-Developers mailing list SharpOS-Developers@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/sharpos-developers
