Thanks, Bertrand. The boilerplate reads nicely. Well done.
One thing to possibly consider is taking a half-step back to make the first reference to JCR as "Content Repository API for Java (JCR)". You missed the morning interview where a reporter (from a German IT magazine) said that the presumption from our community is that everyone automatically understands what these acronyms mean. Even for someone "in the industry", it's good to clarify. A second step back would be (perhaps in a related section; this doesn't have to be in the boilerplate itself) is the background on the name "Sling" itself. I've heard this being asked a few times this week at ApacheCon. I hope this helps. Feel free to ping me if you need anything. Cheers, Sally --- Bertrand Delacretaz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi, > > I had the pleasure of attending Sally's excellent > media training class > on Monday, and as a result here's a new proposal for > a boilerplate > text that describes Sling in a few words. That's > targeted at IT people > who have no idea what Sling is. > > That text could go on the front page of our website, > in release and > other announcements, etc. > > Find it at > http://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/SLING/Boilerplate > - feel free to edit and comment there or discuss > here. > > -Bertrand > mobile +1 617 921 8656 :: fax +1 617 321 4085 sip http://www.dorsetcafe.com/ trade http://www.haloworldwide.com/ self http://www.khudairi.net/ skype sallykhudairi __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com
