Fabulous -- thanks, Bertrand! Glad to be of help. Please do let me (+PRC) know if you have any major announcements coming up. We'd love to support you.
Cheers, Sally --- Bertrand Delacretaz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi Sally, > > Thanks very much for your advice - I have moved the > text to > http://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/SLINGxSITE/Index > - will be > live at http://incubator.apache.org/sling in a few > hours. Incorporated > your comment about the JCR acronym, and added a > placeholder for us to > explain the Sling name. > > -Bertrand > > On Fri, Apr 11, 2008 at 12:11 PM, Sally Khudairi > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Thanks, Bertrand. > > > > The boilerplate reads nicely. Well done. > > > > One thing to possibly consider is taking a > half-step > > back to make the first reference to JCR as > "Content > > Repository API for Java (JCR)". > > > > You missed the morning interview where a reporter > > (from a German IT magazine) said that the > presumption > > from our community is that everyone automatically > > understands what these acronyms mean. Even for > someone > > "in the industry", it's good to clarify. > > > > A second step back would be (perhaps in a related > > section; this doesn't have to be in the > boilerplate > > itself) is the background on the name "Sling" > itself. > > I've heard this being asked a few times this week > at > > ApacheCon. > > > > I hope this helps. Feel free to ping me if you > need > > anything. > > > > Cheers, > > Sally > > > > > > --- Bertrand Delacretaz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > wrote: > > > > > > > > > Hi, > > > > > > I had the pleasure of attending Sally's > excellent > > > media training class > > > on Monday, and as a result here's a new > proposal for > > > a boilerplate > > > text that describes Sling in a few words. > That's > > > targeted at IT people > > > who have no idea what Sling is. > > > > > > That text could go on the front page of our > website, > > > in release and > > > other announcements, etc. > > > > > > Find it at > > > > > > http://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/SLING/Boilerplate > > > - feel free to edit and comment there or > discuss > > > here. > > > > > > -Bertrand > > > > > > > > > mobile +1 617 921 8656 :: fax +1 617 321 4085 > > sip http://www.dorsetcafe.com/ > > trade http://www.haloworldwide.com/ > > self http://www.khudairi.net/ > > skype sallykhudairi > > > > > > > __________________________________________________ > > Do You Yahoo!? > > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam > protection around > > http://mail.yahoo.com > > > > > > > > -- > Bertrand Delacretaz > http://www.codeconsult.ch > mobile +1 617 921 8656 :: fax +1 617 321 4085 sip http://www.dorsetcafe.com/ trade http://www.haloworldwide.com/ self http://www.khudairi.net/ skype sallykhudairi ____________________________________________________________________________________ Be a better friend, newshound, and know-it-all with Yahoo! Mobile. Try it now. http://mobile.yahoo.com/;_ylt=Ahu06i62sR8HDtDypao8Wcj9tAcJ
