On Wednesday, August 20, 2014, Carlos Monterrey <[email protected]> wrote:
> *Hi all,* > > *Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post on Jorge Royan. Thanks for > reviewing: * > > *Blog post:* > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > > *SM calendar: * > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_20 > > *Remembering Jorge Royan* > > - *t*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine > architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan: > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > > > - *t*: Architect, photographer, collaborator, friend - the Wikimedia > movement mourns the passing of Jorge Royan: > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > > Prefer this one over the first one - "saddened" is an ok-ish expression when referring to a single organisation like in the post, but it is a bit weird when applied to the whole movement. Actually, I would suggest leaving it out altogether and writing instead "Wikimedians mourn the passing...". > > > - *f/g*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of > Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan. > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > > Same here - I would suggest to reuse the modified wording of the second tweet above. > > > *Spanish*: > > - *t*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan, arquitecto, > fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigo: > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > > > - *f/g*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan, > arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigohttps. > //blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/ > <https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/> > > Wouldn't it be a bit weird to have these linking to an English post when a Spanish version (the original) is available too? > > > -- > Carlos Monterrey > Communications Associate > Wikimedia Foundation > +1.415.839.6885 ext 6881 > www.wikimediafoundation.org > blog.wikimedia.org > -- Sent from Gmail Mobile
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