Just posted these, as they had not gone out yet.

On Thu, Aug 21, 2014 at 1:54 PM, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote:

>
>
> On Wednesday, August 20, 2014, Carlos Monterrey <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
>> *Hi all,*
>>
>> *Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post on Jorge Royan. Thanks for
>> reviewing: *
>>
>> *Blog post:*
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>
>> *SM calendar: *
>> https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_20
>>
>> *Remembering Jorge Royan*
>>
>>    - *t*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of Argentine
>>    architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan:
>>    https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>
>>
>>    - *t*: Architect, photographer, collaborator, friend - the Wikimedia
>>    movement mourns the passing of Jorge Royan:
>>    https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>
>> Prefer this one over the first one  - "saddened" is an ok-ish expression
> when referring to a single organisation like in the post, but it is a bit
> weird when applied to the whole movement. Actually, I would suggest leaving
> it out altogether and writing instead "Wikimedians mourn the passing...".
>
>
>>
>>
>>    - *f/g*: The Wikimedia Movement is saddened by the passing of
>>    Argentine architect, photographer, collaborator, Jorge Royan.
>>    https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>
>>
> Same here - I would suggest to reuse the modified wording of the second
> tweet above.
>
>>
>>
>> *Spanish*:
>>
>>    - *t*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
>>    arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigo:
>>    https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>
>>
>>    - *f/g*: Estamos entristecidos por la muerte de Jorge Royan,
>>    arquitecto, fotógrafo, colaborador, gran amigohttps.
>>    //blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/
>>    <https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/20/remembering-jorge-royan/>
>>
>> Wouldn't it be a bit weird to have these linking to an English post when
> a Spanish version (the original) is available too?
>
>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Carlos Monterrey
>> Communications Associate
>> Wikimedia Foundation
>> +1.415.839.6885 ext 6881
>> www.wikimediafoundation.org
>> blog.wikimedia.org
>>
>
>
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Tilman Bayer
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Wikimedia Foundation
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