Thank you, Michael!

On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 5:23 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> wrote:

> *Hello everyone,*
>
> *Here is the proposed sm for "Excelling students" blog post. Thanks for
> reviewing!*
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> *Blog post*:
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>
> t: Innovative education project had honor students edit Wikipedia, via
> partnership with @WikimediaIL
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>
> t: Israeli students helped contribute to the sum of all human knowledge -
> as part of their homework:
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>

I like this ^


>
> t: Israeli Mayor thanks honor students for contributing articles as part
> of education project by @WikimediaIL
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>
> t: The city of Be'er Sheva, Israeli Ministry of Education, & @WikimediaIL
> celebrate first year of education project
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>
> t: Israeli High school students were able to contribute articles to Hebrew
> Wikipedia about their city - for class.
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>

This, too^


>
> t: Wikimedia Israel worked with local teachers to help students gain
> writing and digital literacy skills via Wikipedia
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>
> f/g: This past academic year, Wikimedia Israel teamed up with the Israeli
> Ministry of Education, and the municipality of Be'er Sheva in an innovative
> education project that had excelling Israeli students contribute articles
> about their city as part of their curriculum. Learn about the findings from
> a productive first year:
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>

Maybe:

Wikimedia Israel teamed up with the Israeli Ministry of Education, and the
municipality of Be'er Sheva in an innovative education project. Israeli
students contributed Hebrew Wikipedia articles about their city as part of
their curriculum. Here's what happened:


>
>
> f/g: In accordance with lesson plans approved by the Be'er Sheva
> Municipality, Wikimedia Israel worked with local teachers to help students
> garner writing and digital literacy skills as part of an education
> initiative through engagement with Hebrew Wikipedia.
>
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/
>

How about:

Wikimedia Israel worked with local teachers in the Be'er Sheva Municipality to
help students improve their writing and digital literacy skills as part of
an education initiative on Hebrew Wikipedia.
http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/10/excelling-students-in-beer-sheva-write-articles-about-their-city-in-the-hebrew-wikipedia/



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