Thanks Joe, thoughts inline James Alexander Manager Trust & Safety Wikimedia Foundation (415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur
On Tue, Sep 22, 2015 at 5:54 PM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]> wrote: > Hey all, > > We today published "News on Wikipedia: Japan shocks the rugby world, an > earthquake strikes Chile, and more" to the Wikimedia blog. URL: > > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/09/22/japan-rugby-chile-earthquake/ > > We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread through > the rest of the week to keep things timely. > > Please do comment for tone. > > *Twitter:* > > • Greece just had their second general election in nine months. > #NewsOnWikipedia > hmm, this works but I wonder about a bit more of an active voice? (I think I'm using that phrase correctly...) such as: "Greece finishes their second general election in nine months. #NewsOnWikipedia" think it flows better then "just had" > • Japan's military now has powers it hasn't had since World War II. > #NewsOnWikipedia > LGTM, other thoughts: - Japan interprets it's constitution to allow it to enter foreign conflicts to attack in self-defense. #NewsOnWikipedia - Japan's military gains powers it hasn't had since World War II. #NewsOnWikipedia • A magnitude 8.3 earthquake struck off the coast of Chile last week. > #NewsOnWikipedia > LGTM > • Burkina Faso experienced its second major political uprising in two > years. #NewsOnWikipedia > Perhaps experiences? (rather then experienced) LGTM with either > • Japan won its first Rugby World Cup game since 1991... against the > Springboks. #NewsOnWikipedia > > Springboks is such a great word... how can you NOT want to figure out what the hell that is when you read it... [/me had to google before responding] > *Facebook/G+:* > > • Greece just held its third national vote of the year... #NewsOnWikipedia > LGTM, same slight comment as above. > • Japan has promoted legislation allowing it to fight in foreign > conflicts for the first time since World War II. #NewsOnWikipedia > LGTM > • An earthquake off the coast of Chile was felt in São Paulo — more than > 1,600 miles away. #NewsOnWikipedia > LGTM • Last year, a populist movement overthrew the President of Burkina Faso. > Last week, the new President was overthrown in a coup d'état. > #NewsOnWikipedia > Like this, LGTM > • Teams South Africa has lost to in a Rugby World Cup: England, New > Zealand, Australia ... and now Japan. #NewsOnWikipedia > Are these the only teams they've ever lost too? Perhaps adding Only somewhere? "The only teams South Africa has lost to during a Rugby World Cup: ...." > best, > Joe > > -- > *Joe Sutherland* > Communications Intern [remote] > m: +44 (0) 7722 916 433 | t: @jrbsu <http://twitter.com/jrbsu> | w: > JSutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)> > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > >
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