FYI Michael, I've scheduled the Japan post directly with Facebook since I'm
tagging a whole bunch of rugby pages in it, so it's not going to show up in
Buffer :(

On 23 September 2015 at 18:09, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]>
wrote:

> These have now been scheduled. I'm going to stick without the "only" for
> the rugby Facebook post if only because it's supposed to read like a
> definitive list (because it is), and "only" is kind of redundant for that.
>
> Thanks for the suggestions though!!
>
> Joe
>
> On 23 September 2015 at 03:02, James Alexander <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
>> Thanks Joe, thoughts inline
>>
>> James Alexander
>> Manager
>> Trust & Safety
>> Wikimedia Foundation
>> (415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur
>>
>> On Tue, Sep 22, 2015 at 5:54 PM, Joe Sutherland <
>> [email protected]> wrote:
>>
>>> Hey all,
>>>
>>> We today published "News on Wikipedia: Japan shocks the rugby world, an
>>> earthquake strikes Chile, and more" to the Wikimedia blog. URL:
>>>
>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/09/22/japan-rugby-chile-earthquake/
>>>
>>> We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread through
>>> the rest of the week to keep things timely.
>>>
>>> Please do comment for tone.
>>>
>>> *Twitter:*
>>>
>>> • Greece just had their second general election in nine months.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> hmm, this works but I wonder about a bit more of an active voice? (I
>> think I'm using that phrase correctly...) such as:
>>
>> "Greece finishes their second general election in nine months.
>> #NewsOnWikipedia" think it flows better then "just had"
>>
>>
>>> • Japan's military now has powers it hasn't had since World War II.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM, other thoughts:
>>
>>    - Japan interprets it's constitution to allow it to enter foreign
>>    conflicts to attack in self-defense.  #NewsOnWikipedia
>>    - Japan's military gains powers it hasn't had since World War II.
>>    #NewsOnWikipedia
>>
>> • A magnitude 8.3 earthquake struck off the coast of Chile last week.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM
>>
>>
>>> • Burkina Faso experienced its second major political uprising in two
>>> years. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Perhaps experiences? (rather then experienced) LGTM with either
>>
>>
>>> • Japan won its first Rugby World Cup game since 1991... against the
>>> Springboks. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>> Springboks is such a great word... how can you NOT want to figure out
>> what the hell that is when you read it... [/me had to google before
>> responding]
>>
>>
>>> *Facebook/G+:*
>>>
>>> • Greece just held its third national vote of the year...
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM, same slight comment as above.
>>
>>
>>> • Japan has promoted legislation allowing it to fight in foreign
>>> conflicts for the first time since World War II. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>> LGTM
>>
>>> • An earthquake off the coast of Chile was felt in São Paulo — more than
>>> 1,600 miles away. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM
>>
>> • Last year, a populist movement overthrew the President of Burkina
>>> Faso. Last week, the new President was overthrown in a coup d'état.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Like this, LGTM
>>
>>
>>> • Teams South Africa has lost to in a Rugby World Cup: England, New
>>> Zealand, Australia ... and now Japan. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Are these the only teams they've ever lost too? Perhaps adding Only
>> somewhere? "The only teams South Africa has lost to during a Rugby World
>> Cup: ...."
>>
>>
>>>
>> best,
>>> Joe
>>>
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