Hi authors of 6rd Radius, When I reviewed this document again, there are some minor comments.
1. Line 6, Paragraph 1 of Section 1: should be ³6rd adopts Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol (DHCP) ...² 2. Line 4 of the paragraph below Fig 2, Section 3: The word ³lifetimes² should be ³lifetime². 3. The ³Reserved² part on Page 6, Section 4.1: To be compatible with other IPv6 prefix attributes in the Radius Protocol. ³RADIUS² may be better than ³Radius². 4. The 2nd paragraph of Section 4.2: The word ³meaning² should be ³meanings²? 5. Section 6, same RFC numbers show up twice. It¹s better to simplify. Please take a look and revise accordingly if needed. Yong _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
