Thanks, Yong. All of them have been corrected. A new version has been submitted.
Best regards, Sheng >-----Original Message----- >From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On >Behalf Of Yong Cui >Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2012 10:46 AM >To: [email protected] >Subject: [Softwires] Comments on 6rd Radius > >Hi authors of 6rd Radius, > >When I reviewed this document again, there are some minor comments. > >1. Line 6, Paragraph 1 of Section 1: > should be ³6rd adopts Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol (DHCP) ...² > >2. Line 4 of the paragraph below Fig 2, Section 3: >The word ³lifetimes² should be ³lifetime². > >3. The ³Reserved² part on Page 6, Section 4.1: >To be compatible with other IPv6 prefix attributes in the Radius Protocol. > >³RADIUS² may be better than ³Radius². > >4. The 2nd paragraph of Section 4.2: >The word ³meaning² should be ³meanings²? > >5. Section 6, same RFC numbers show up twice. It¹s better to simplify. > >Please take a look and revise accordingly if needed. > >Yong > > >_______________________________________________ >Softwires mailing list >[email protected] >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
