Agreed.

Cheers,
Wojciech.


On 18 March 2014 15:59, <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Woj,
>
> Removing the modal verb has left us with a rather hefty sentence:
>
> .....allows for the reduction of the amount of centralised state by means
> of rules expressing an algorithmic address mapping relationship between
> the IPv6 subnet prefix and IPv4 address.
>
> It would be clearer as two:
>
> ....allows for a reduction of the amount of centralised state using rules to
> express IPv4/IPv6 address mappings. This introduces an algorithmic
> relationship between the IPv6 subnet and IPv4 address.
>
> Cheers,
> Ian
>
> From: Wojciech Dec <[email protected]>
> Date: Tuesday, 18 March 2014 15:37
> To: ian Farrer <[email protected]>
> Cc: Softwires-wg WG <[email protected]>
>
> Subject: Re: [Softwires] Proposed text that describes lw4o6 and map-e
>
> Hi Ian,
>
> indeed. Would however prefer to remove the modal verb however (which leads
> to a few changes):
>
> Lightweight 4over6 is a solution designed specifically for complete
> independence between IPv6 subnet prefix and IPv4 address with or without
> IPv4 address sharing.
> This is accomplished by maintaining state for each softwire
> (per-subscriber state) in the central lwAFTR and a hub-and-spoke forwarding
> architecture.  [I-D.ietf-softwire-map] also offers these capabilities or,
> alternatively, allows for the reduction of the amount of centralised state
> by means of rules expressing an algorithmic address mapping relationship
> between the IPv6 subnet prefix and IPv4 address. This relationship also
> allows the option of direct, meshed connectivity between users.
>
> Cheers,
> Wojciech.
>
>
> On 18 March 2014 15:23, ian Farrer <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Woj,
>>
>> One thing about your propsed wording is that it reads like addressing
>> independence and state reduction can be realised concurrently. What about
>> the following (with some other slight language cleanups):
>>
>>
>> Lightweight 4over6 is a solution designed specifically for complete
>> independence between IPv6 subnet prefix and IPv4 address with or without
>> IPv4 address sharing.
>> This is accomplished by maintaining state for each softwire
>> (per-subscriber state) in the central lwAFTR and a hub-and-spoke forwarding
>> architecture.  [I-D.ietf-softwire-map] can offer these capabilities or,
>> alternatively, reduce the amount of centralised state using algorithmic
>> address mappings rules, introducing a relationship between the IPv6 subnet
>> prefix and IPv4 address. This relationship also allows the option of
>> direct, meshed connectivity between users.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Ian
>>
>>
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>>
>> From: Wojciech Dec
>>
>> Sent: 03/18/14 03:19 PM
>>
>> To: Ted Lemon
>>
>> Subject: Re: [Softwires] Proposed text that describes lw4o6 and map-e
>>
>>
>>
>> On 18 March 2014 15:08, Ted Lemon <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>
>>> On Mar 18, 2014, at 10:04 AM, Wojciech Dec <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> > It's rather clear that lw46 also uses "an algorithm", if not THE
>>> "algorithm"...
>>>
>>> It doesn't use a mapping algorithm to map between IPv4 and IPv6
>>> addresses, which was the point that Qi expressed in the text he sent out
>>> this morning.
>>>
>>
>>
>> Text I (re)proposed said it all:
>> Lightweight 4over6 is a solution designed specifically for complete
>> independence between IPv6 subnet prefix and IPv4 address with or without
>> IPv4 address sharing.
>> This is accomplished by maintaining state for each softwire
>> (per-subscriber state) in the lwAFTR and a hub-and-spoke forwarding
>> architecture. [I-D.ietf-softwire-map] offers the same capabilities along
>> with means for reducing the amount of such state using *algorithmic*address 
>> mapping rules, which however introduce a relation between the IPv6
>> subnet prefix and IPv4 address. This relation also allows optional meshed
>> connectivity between users.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>
>
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