Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial corrections to suggest. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §4.1.2: > invalid packets that have been identified. There are two kind of "...two kinds..." > - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source "...will validate..." --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §5: > DESCRIPTION > "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for > clarity." "...hexadecimal..." ^ _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
