Hi Adam, Thank you for your kind review. We will update these editorial comments in the next version.
Cheers Yu >-----Original Message----- >From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On >Behalf Of Adam Roach >Sent: Tuesday, May 22, 2018 11:08 AM >To: The IESG >Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; >[email protected]; [email protected] >Subject: [Softwires] Adam Roach's No Objection on >draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: (with COMMENT) > >Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for >draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib-12: No Objection > >When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email >addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory >paragraph, however.) > > >Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html >for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > >The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-map-mib/ > > > >---------------------------------------------------------------------- >COMMENT: >---------------------------------------------------------------------- > >Thank you for a clearly written document. I have some very editorial >corrections to suggest. > >--------------------------------------------------------------------------- > >§4.1.2: > > invalid packets that have been identified. There are two kind of > >"...two kinds..." > > - The Border Relay (BR) will validates the received packet's source > >"...will validate..." > >--------------------------------------------------------------------------- > >§5: > > DESCRIPTION > "Indicates that the PSID is represented as hexidecimal for > clarity." > >"...hexadecimal..." > ^ > > >_______________________________________________ >Softwires mailing list >[email protected] >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
