James,
Engmish is not my mother tongue, so my inability to parse the text you've
proposed may be of no significance.
But I can parse the original sentence.
My 2c.
Thumb typed by Sasha Vainshtein
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Subject: [spring] [Errata Rejected] RFC8355 (5380)
The following errata report has been rejected for RFC8355,
"Resiliency Use Cases in Source Packet Routing in Networking (SPRING) Networks".
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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5380
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Status: Rejected
Type: Editorial
Reported by: James Bensley <[email protected]>
Date Reported: 2018-06-06
Rejected by: Martin Vigoureux (IESG)
Section: 3.2
Original Text
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An alternative protection strategy consists in management-free local
protection that is aimed at providing a repair for the destination
based on the shortest path to the destination.
Corrected Text
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An alternative protection strategy exists in management-free local
protection
Notes
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--VERIFIER NOTES--
No justification given to justify the need for the change.
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RFC8355 (draft-ietf-spring-resiliency-use-cases-12)
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Title : Resiliency Use Cases in Source Packet Routing in
Networking (SPRING) Networks
Publication Date : March 2018
Author(s) : C. Filsfils, Ed., S. Previdi, Ed., B. Decraene, R. Shakir
Category : INFORMATIONAL
Source : Source Packet Routing in Networking
Area : Routing
Stream : IETF
Verifying Party : IESG
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