Dear Authors, et al.,
I've read the draft. Thank you for your thoughtful consideration of comments 
from earlier discussions. The document is well-written and I agree with it 
being on the Informational track. I've several questions and much appreciate it 
if you help me to understand.
In the example of a STAMP test packet (Figure 2) the text suggests that IPv4 
addresses can be used as the source and destination. In which case you see IPv4 
address family should be used in the SR environment?
I suggest changing the reference in Figure 2 from Section 4.2 of RFC 8762 to 
Section 3 of RFC 8972 (Figure 1). Thus the STAMP Session Identifier will be 
supported in SR environments and implementations can use the value of the field 
to simplify demultiplexing STAMP test sessions.
I couldn't understand the last sentence in Section 4.1.1:
   An IPv4 address from the range 127/8 or IPv6
   loopback address ::1/128 [RFC4291] must not be used to IP route test
   packets in a network.
How this requirement (if that is the requirement, then s/must not/MUST NOT/ 
might be needed), is related to RFC 1801 that states that:
      A router SHOULD NOT forward, except over a loopback interface, any
      packet that has a destination address on network 127.
Also, it appears that only IP encapsulation is explained in Section 4.1.1. 
Since the draft includes in its scope both SRv6 and SR-MPLS, I wonder in what 
case IPv4 addressing will be used? It seems that rather than including IPv4, 
the section should document the encapsulation of a STAMP test packet over an 
MPLS link.
Section 4.1.2 also refers to IPv4 address family being used by a Session-Sender 
and SR Policy. What could be the use case for IPv4 in SR?
What is the benefit of using the inner IP Header as presented in Figure 4?
As for Figure 2, I propose changing the reference to Section 3 of RFC 8792 
(Figure 2).
As for Figure 4, I have a question about the inner IP header in Figure 7.
Can you point to the definition (or provide it) of the loopback mode?
The second paragraph of Section 4.2.3 suggests that the Session-Sender is 
expected to receive a self-addressed STAMP test packet. Can you point out the 
text in RFC 8762 that defines the base STAMP functionality on which this model 
is based?
In the same paragraph, the draft states:
   The Session-Sender sets the Reflector UDP port that it uses to receive the 
test packet.
Can you clarify the definition of the Reflector UDP port?
The third paragraph, as I understand it, assumes that the Session-Sender does 
not use some fields to calculate performance metrics. I couldn't find such a 
mode is described in RFC 8762. Does this draft propose changes to the RFC 8762?
I've got confused by the rules listed for setting TTL in Section 4.4.1. For 
example, according to the rule in the third paragraph, TTL must be set to 1 for 
the STAMP measurement over a link. But that seems like the opposite to what is 
required in RFC 5082 The Generalized TTL Security Mechanism (GTSM). I hope you 
can share why TTL must be set to 1 in this case.
The same question for the use case described in the second paragraph.
Two previous questions are also applicable to Section 4.4.2.
Section 5, as I understand it, suggests that all modes of operation described 
in Section 4 can be used to measure packet loss. At the same time, in Section 
4.2.3. Loopback Measurement Mode is noted (or required) that the Session-Sender 
sets the value of the Session-Sender Sequence Number field to zero. If that is 
the case, how the packet loss is calculated in the loopback mode?
Also, Section 5 provides a very intriguing statement:
   This method can be used for inferred packet loss measurement,
   however, it does not provide accurate data packet loss metric.
Do you have more information, perhaps a reference to a study or RFC, to support 
this statement? Following the logic of that statement, if packet loss measured 
using STAMP is not accurate, wouldn't measured packet delay also be not 
accurate? It seems that, if authors want to maintain this position, the 
definition of the accuracy of the measurement must be introduced.
I feel that the suggestion to variate IPv4 address in measuring performance 
metrics in the SR-MPLS environment is somewhat outdated and is not in step with 
RFCs 6790 and 8662. Why choosing addresses from the 127/8 range is preferred to 
using the Entropy label which is more likely to be used on the data traffic?
I have another question on the last sentence of Section 8:
   The STAMP Session-Reflector must not transmit reply test packet if it is
   not the intended destination node in the "Destination Node Address"
   TLV [I-D.gandhi-ippm-stamp-srpm].
How does this requirement work in the case of a P2MP SR policy? And which 
address would be used in the Destination Node Address TLV in that case?


I believe that while some questions are non-blocking and can be addressed at a 
later time, there is a significant number of technical substantive issues that 
must be resolved before the adoption of this draft.
I am looking forward to the Authors' feedback.

Regards,
Greg Mirsky
Sr. Standardization Expert
预研标准部/有线研究院/有线产品经营部  Standard Preresearch Dept./Wireline Product R&D 
Institute/Wireline Product Operation Division
E: [email protected]
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Dear WG:
The IPPM WG has adopted 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-00  as a WG 
document. In a previous communication (December 16th 2020), the SPRING chairs 
decided not to adopt 
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-gandhi-spring-stamp-srpm-06.txt into the 
WG until its companion document was accepted by the IPPM WG. This has now 
happened and  therefore we feel it is now time to revisit the WG adoption of 
the SPRING document.
Due to the lapse of several months since the initial WG adoption call, the 
chairs would like to start another 2-week WG adoption call for 
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-gandhi-spring-stamp-srpm-06.txt, ending 
June 21st 2021.
After review of the SPRING document please indicate support (or not) for WG 
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