Module: sip-router
Branch: master
Commit: 25600feab7d5d3b30420a05fd4c899f0bbbff667
URL:    
http://git.sip-router.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi/sip-router/?a=commit;h=25600feab7d5d3b30420a05fd4c899f0bbbff667

Author: Olle E. Johansson <[email protected]>
Committer: Olle E. Johansson <[email protected]>
Date:   Sun Dec  2 21:24:13 2012 +0100

auth: Documentation corrections

---

 modules/auth/doc/auth.xml      |    4 ++--
 modules/auth/doc/functions.xml |   24 ++++++++++++------------
 modules/auth/doc/params.xml    |    4 ++--
 3 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/modules/auth/doc/auth.xml b/modules/auth/doc/auth.xml
index bf87b47..59cfd9e 100644
--- a/modules/auth/doc/auth.xml
+++ b/modules/auth/doc/auth.xml
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@
            authentication backends).
        </para>
        <para>
-           We decided to break the authentication code into several modules
+           We decided to divide the authentication code into several modules
            because there are now more than one backends (currently database
            authentication and radius are supported). This allows us to create
-           separate packages so uses can install and load only required
+           separate packages so users can install and load only the required
            functionality. This also allows us to avoid unnecessary
            dependencies in the binary packages.
        </para>
diff --git a/modules/auth/doc/functions.xml b/modules/auth/doc/functions.xml
index eee1f56..4140f8c 100644
--- a/modules/auth/doc/functions.xml
+++ b/modules/auth/doc/functions.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <section id="consume_credentials">
        <title><function>consume_credentials()</function></title>
        <para>
-           This function removes previously authorized credentials from the
+           This function removes previously authorized credential headers from 
the
            message being processed by the server. That means that the
            downstream message will not contain credentials there were used by
            this server. This ensures that the proxy will not reveal
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ if (has_credentials("myrealm")) {
                        </para>
                        <para>
                        It must not be empty string <quote></quote>. In case of 
REGISTER
-                       requests To header field domain (e.g., variable $td) 
can be used
+                       requests, the To header field domain (e.g., variable 
$td) can be used
                        (because this header field represents the user being 
registered),
                        for all other messages From header field domain can be 
used
                        (e.g., variable $fd).
@@ -132,10 +132,10 @@ if (!www_authenticate("$td", "subscriber")) {
                put the header field into a response generated from the request 
the
                server is processing and send the reply. Upon reception of such 
a
                reply the user agent should compute credentials and retry the 
request.
-               For more information regarding digest authentication see 
RFC2617.    See module parameter force_stateless_reply
-               regarding sending of the reply.
+               For more information regarding digest authentication see 
RFC2617.
+               See module parameter force_stateless_reply regarding sending of 
the reply.
                </para>
-               <para>Meaning of the parameters the same as for function
+               <para>Meaning of the parameters is the same as for function
                www_challenge(realm, flags)</para>
                <para>
                This function can be used from REQUEST_ROUTE.
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ if (!proxy_authenticate("$fd", "subscriber")) {
                The function challenges a user agent for authentication. It 
combines
                the functions www_challenge() and proxy_challenge(), by calling
                internally the first one for REGISTER requests and the second 
one for
-               the rest of the request types.
+               the rest of other request types.
                </para>
                <para>Meaning of the parameters the same as for function
                www_challenge(realm, flags)</para>
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ if (!proxy_authenticate("$fd", "subscriber")) {
                This function can be used from REQUEST_ROUTE.
                </para>
                <example>
-               <title>proxy_challenge usage</title>
+               <title>auth_challenge usage</title>
                <programlisting format="linespecific">
 ...
 if (!auth_check("$fd", "subscriber", "1")) {
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if (!auth_check("$fd", "subscriber", "1")) {
                </listitem>
                <listitem>
                        <para><emphasis>passwd</emphasis> - the password to be 
used
-                       for authentication. Can contain config variables. 
Username is
+                       for authentication. Can contain config variables. The 
Username is
                        taken from Auth header.</para>
                </listitem>
                <listitem>
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ if (!auth_check("$fd", "subscriber", "1")) {
                </itemizedlist>
                <para>
                        When challenge header is built and stored in avp,
-                       append_to_reply() and sl reply functions can be used to 
send
+                       append_to_reply() and the sl reply functions can be 
used to send
                        appropriate SIP reply to challenge for authentication.
                </para>
                <para>
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if (!pv_proxy_authenticate("$fd", "$avp(password)", "0")) {
                This function can be used from REQUEST_ROUTE.
                </para>
                <example>
-               <title>pv_proxy_authenticate usage</title>
+               <title>pv_auth_check usage</title>
                <programlisting format="linespecific">
 ...
 $avp(password)="xyz";
@@ -370,10 +370,10 @@ if (!pv_auth_check("$fd", "$avp(password)", "0", "1")) {
 
        <section id="auth_get_www_authenticate">
                <title>
-                       <function 
moreinfo="none">auth_get_www_authenticate(realm, flags, pvdst)</function>
+                       <function 
moreinfo="none">auth_get_www_authenticate(realm, flags, pvdest)</function>
                </title>
                <para>
-               Build WWW-Authentication header and set the resulting value in 
'pvdest' parameter.
+               Build WWW-Authentication header and set the resulting value in 
'pvdest' pseudo-variable parameter.
                </para>
                <para>Meaning of the realm and flags parameters is the same as 
for
                pv_www_authenticate(realm, passwd, flags)</para>
diff --git a/modules/auth/doc/params.xml b/modules/auth/doc/params.xml
index f9c1f8a..973f14e 100644
--- a/modules/auth/doc/params.xml
+++ b/modules/auth/doc/params.xml
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
          <varname>auth_checks_in_dlg</varname> (flags)
        </title>
        <para>
-           These three module parameters control which optional integrity
-         checks will be performed on the SIP message carrying digest response
+       These three module parameters control which optional integrity
+        checks will be performed on the SIP message carrying digest response
         during digest authentication. <varname>auth_check_register</varname>
         controls integrity checks to be performed on REGISTER messages,
         <varname>auth_checks_no_dlg</varname> controls which optional


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