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English Language syntax error

           Summary: English Language syntax error
           Product: Struts
           Version: Unknown
          Platform: Other
               URL: http://jakarta.apache.org/struts/kickstart.html
        OS/Version: Other
            Status: NEW
          Severity: Normal
          Priority: Other
         Component: Documentation
        AssignedTo: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
        ReportedBy: [EMAIL PROTECTED]


The following sentance needs repair; as the word orientated is used improperly:

Since Struts does not have paid personnel working on the project, we simply 
cannot make date-orientated commitments.

Please correct to one of the following usages:
1.  Since Struts does not have paid personnel working on the project, we simply 
cannot make time sensitive commitments.
2.  Since Struts does not have paid personnel working on the project, we simply 
cannot make dated commitments.
3.  Since Struts does not have paid personnel working on the project, we simply 
cannot make commitments to dates.
4.  Since Struts does not have paid personnel working on the project, we simply 
cannot make date-oriented commitments.

Option 3 above is my personal preference, but any would be preferable to the 
current usage.

advTHANKSance

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