Thank you Mukom for the review. Your comments will be incorporated in the next revision of the draft.
Best regards, Peng From: sunset4 [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Mukom Akong T. Sent: Wednesday, April 08, 2015 7:00 AM To: [email protected] Subject: [sunset4] Fwd: Review of draft-ietf-sunset4-gapanalysis-06 I committed to reviewing this draft. I only have one suggestion for the authors to improve legibility: itemising the specific set of criteria for review in section 2. I also attach the reviewed document. P/S: This is my first review so I might not be aware of a proper procedure to submit it, please point me to the right procedure if this isn't it. Regards. -- Mukom Akong T. http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “When you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -- Mukom Akong T. http://about.me/perfexcellence | twitter: @perfexcellent ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “When you work, you are the FLUTE through whose lungs the whispering of the hours turns to MUSIC" - Kahlil Gibran -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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