Thank you Motie,
If you and Keith try to help me with the English, I would welcome it. It is an early draft and I am very much aware of my weaknesses in English. For me it is better to write without thinking on the correct language, which I think that many on the list noticed. The thought pattern is more important than the language. I have found a very large and nice understanding for this in the bio fuel group. Maybe it is that everybody on the list either are foreigners or used to them. Before publication I always try to correct myself and if somebody volunteer to help me, I am always grateful. Hakan At 07:10 AM 11/27/2002 +0000, you wrote: >--- In [EMAIL PROTECTED], Hakan Falk <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > All the discussions about bio fuel business, inspired me to write >the > > following piece for publishing on our web site. This is an early >draft and > > I thought that the members of this list are the best ones for >getting > > feedback. > > > > Hakan > > > > > Hakan, > Very nice job! I can't refute or add to your paper without more >study, and likely not even then. It seems to accurately portray my >perception. > You did ask for feedback, so I must presume you won't take offense >at a mild criticism....Before final publication, you should have >someone more proficient in English proof-read and correct it. The >clarity is fine for those of us capable of comprehending your >thoughts and able to ignore minor grammatical errors. I have a great >deal of respect for your knowledge, insights and professional >opinion. I do think your expertise would be more easily recognizable >and acceptable to non-experts, if the wording was of equal caliber. > I humbly offer my services to assist in this manner, although Keith >may be better qualified than I. > > Respectfully, > Motie > > >Biofuel at Journey to Forever: >http://journeytoforever.org/biofuel.html > >Biofuels list archives: >http://archive.nnytech.net/ > >Please do NOT send Unsubscribe messages to the list address. >To unsubscribe, send an email to: >[EMAIL PROTECTED] > >Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/ Biofuel at Journey to Forever: http://journeytoforever.org/biofuel.html Biofuels list archives: http://archive.nnytech.net/ Please do NOT send Unsubscribe messages to the list address. To unsubscribe, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
