On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI <delp...@freebsd.org> wrote: > Author: delphij > Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 > New Revision: 207283 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283 > > Log: > Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read. > > Reviewed by: Alexander Best <alexbestms wwu de> > MFC after: 13 days > > Modified: > head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 > > Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 > ============================================================================== > --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 (r207282) > +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 (r207283) > @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by > .An Xin LI Aq delp...@freebsd.org . > .Sh BUGS > According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bit > -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than > -4GB in size. This limitation also applies to > +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB. > +This limitation also applies to
Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had "files that is" instead of "files that are". The new version has a comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore" should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop. I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility". -Ben Kaduk > .Fl l > option of > .Nm > _______________________________________________ > svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org" > _______________________________________________ svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
