Hi, Ben, On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 10:55 AM, Ben Kaduk <minimar...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI <delp...@freebsd.org> wrote: >> Author: delphij >> Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 >> New Revision: 207283 >> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283 >> >> Log: >> Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read. >> >> Reviewed by: Alexander Best <alexbestms wwu de> >> MFC after: 13 days >> >> Modified: >> head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> >> Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 (r207282) >> +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 (r207283) >> @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by >> .An Xin LI Aq delp...@freebsd.org . >> .Sh BUGS >> According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bit >> -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than >> -4GB in size. This limitation also applies to >> +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB. >> +This limitation also applies to > > Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had > "files that is" instead of "files that are". The new version has a > comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore" > should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop. > > I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this > change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility".
I would appreciate some native English speaking committers to help me on this, I personally have no much strong opinion on the wording :-/ >> .Fl l >> option of >> .Nm >> _______________________________________________ >> svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list >> http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head >> To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org" >> > -- Xin LI <delp...@delphij.net> http://www.delphij.net _______________________________________________ svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
