Thanks for this. Great to see that Paul has maintained the format, tone, and message from the release we've worked on together over the summer :-D
My suggestion would be to tweak the top-level (sub-head and opening paragraph; changes in between the **Kleene stars**) very slightly to read: THE APACHE SOFTWARE FOUNDATION ANNOUNCES THE RELEASE OF APACHE SYNAPSE v.1.1 Improved Open Source **Enterprise Service Bus** makes SOA simpler and faster FOREST HILL MD 12 November 2007 The Apache Software Foundation's (ASF) Web Services Project today announced the release of Apache Synapse v.1.1, the second full release of the Open Source **Enterprise Service Bus**. = = = How can I help otherwise? We have attending press at ApacheCon, and I'll definitely liaise with them on this! Thanks in advance, Paul, for standing by as spokesperson! Chat soon, Sally > --- Jim Jagielski <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > > > > > Begin forwarded message: > > > > > From: "Paul Fremantle" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > Date: November 8, 2007 5:17:53 AM EST > > > To: "Apache Public Relations" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>, > > synapse- > > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > Subject: Synapse 1.1 release pr > > > Message-Id: > > > > > > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > > > > Hi > > > > > > Sorry for the delay - this is what I've come up > > with for the > > > Synapse 1.1 announcement. > > > > > > Some of it is left over from the 1.0 > announcement, > > but since that > > > never went out (!) I thought it was worth > keeping. > > > > > > Paul > > > > > > -- > > > Paul Fremantle > > > Co-Founder and VP of Technical Sales, WSO2 > > > OASIS WS-RX TC Co-chair > > > > > > blog: http://pzf.fremantle.org > > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > > "Oxygenating the Web Service Platform", > www.wso2.com> > > > > > mobile +1 617 921 8656 :: fax +1 617 321 4085 > sip http://www.dorsetcafe.com/ > trade http://www.haloworldwide.com/ > self http://www.khudairi.net/ > skype sallykhudairi > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam > protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com > mobile +1 617 921 8656 :: fax +1 617 321 4085 sip http://www.dorsetcafe.com/ trade http://www.haloworldwide.com/ self http://www.khudairi.net/ skype sallykhudairi __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
