Hi George,
Your comments are much appreciated.
At 07:25 PM 2/27/01 +0000, Maslyar, George wrote:
>Picky dude that I am:
>1. The Table of Contents expires in July, all the rest in August.
Inconsistent footnote set up. Corrected.
>2. Introduction. Change "fundamental tenants" to "fundamental tenets"
..umm.. I guess there _are_ no people living within syslog. Corrected.
>3. 5.4 Examples Change "TIMESTAME" to "TIMESTAMP"
Corrected.
>4. 6. Here, species is singular. Change to "One species of moths uses "
I think I missed that week of 4th grade English. Corrected.
>5. 6.1 Packet Parameters Add a comma after 'some of'. "it may log all of,
>or the source address and some of, the contents of the message, or it may
>discard the message altogether."
I've tried to clear this up a bit so I've changed it to:
Various behaviors have been seen on receivers that do receive messages
greater than 1024 bytes. Some have been seen to log the entire contents
of the message, while others have been seen to log only portions of the
message. Still others have been known to discard the message altogether.
>6. 6.2 Change the words inside the parentheses to read: "(either from the
>machine from which the messages are purportedly sent or from any other
>machine)"
Corrected.
>I enjoyed reading this document; it provides an explanation of previously
>unspecified syslog behaviour, and prepares the way for the next generation
>secure-syslog.
Thanks. :-)
>I do hope that backwards compatibility will not be a
>hindrance in its formation.
Let me know if the ID isn't liberal enough to allow for just about any
known and observed behavior.
I'll get this resubmitted to the draft-editor, the Secretariat and our
sponsoring AD.
Many thanks,
Chris
>Thank you for your hard work on this document.
>
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: Chris Lonvick [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]]
>Sent: Monday, February 26, 2001 8:54 AM
>To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>Subject: Last Day on syslog-syslog
>
>
>Hi Everyone,
>
>The latest draft for syslog-syslog was published this morning.
>(I submitted it on Thursday but the Draft Editors were very
>busy pushing out all of the ver-00 IDs before the cutoff on
>Friday.) You can find it here:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-syslog-06.txt
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