Thank you Tom, for doing this review of the references and boilerplate. Working group, we need more reviews, please.
dbh > -----Original Message----- > From: tom.petch [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Saturday, February 13, 2010 1:08 PM > To: David Harrington; syslog > Subject: Re: [Syslog] Working Group Last Call: draft-ietf-syslog-dtls > > David > > I looked at boilerplates and this I-D does not conform to > Guidelines to Authors of Internet-Drafts > dated 9 February 2010. > > The copyright, > " Copyright (c) YYYY IETF Trust and the persons identified as the > document authors. All rights reserved. > > This document is subject to BCP 78 and the IETF Trust's Legal > Provisions Relating to IETF Documents > (http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info) in effect on the date of > publication of this document. Please review these documents > carefully, as they describe your rights and restrictions with > respect to this document. Code Components extracted from this > document must include Simplified BSD License text as > described in > Section 4.e of the Trust Legal Provisions and are > provided without > warranty as described in the Simplified BSD License." > > must precede the 'Internet-Draft Boilerplate' and note that > there is an extra > 'Simplified' in it compared with the I-D. > > And there is an additional /ietf/ in the very first URL in > the I-D as it stands > which is also now an .html and no longer a .txt. > > I am not sure what you are looking for with References; my > experience is that > xml2rfc does a better job than I ever do:-( > > But, as I have said before, 2914 and 5405 are no longer > referenced in the body > of > the I-D. The references all exist and are not obsoleted and I > agree with the > division of Normative and Informative. > > Tom Petch > > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "David Harrington" <[email protected]> > To: <[email protected]> > Sent: Thursday, February 04, 2010 4:28 PM > Subject: [Syslog] Working Group Last Call: draft-ietf-syslog-dtls > > > > Hi, > > > > This message officially starts the Syslog Working Group > Last Call for > > the following document: > > > > Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS) Transport Mapping > for Syslog > > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-dtls-01.txt > > > > The Working Group Last Call for this document will end February 19. > > > > To help get this document reviewed throughly, we are seeking > > volunteers to review the documents for the following > special reviews: > > 1) Spelling and grammar, > > 2) boilerplates and reference review, > > 3) security review > > > > The chairs want to see a minimum number of content reviews before we > > submit the documents to the IESG. If you review the document and it > > looks fine, please post a statement that you have reviewed and found > > the document acceptable. Obviously, it if does not look acceptable > > please identify your objections, preferably with suggested text that > > would make it acceptable. > > > > Thanks, > > David Harrington > > [email protected] > > [email protected] > > [email protected] > > co-chair, Syslog WG > > _______________________________________________ Syslog mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/syslog
