Hi, Some my review finding:
1, "originator" is used twice in the document without terminology definition, "original sender" is used in other paragraphs for the same entity, replace "originator" with "original sender"? 2, Section 8.4, "Cryptographically signing messages could prevent the alteration of TIMESTAMPs and thus the replay attack.', Signature is only one option for message integrity. My suggestion is to change it to "Message or transport integrity mechansim could be used to prevent the alteration TIMESTAMP of the message or message delivery sequence." 3, TimeStamp: when timestamp is set, by whom? An originator or relay? I can not find in the doc. BTW, TIMESTAMP can be utilized to avoid a forward loop descripted in section 8.9, if it is set by originator. Thanks! Miao > -----Original Message----- > From: David Harrington [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Tuesday, August 29, 2006 2:35 AM > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: [Syslog] Working Group Last Calls > > Hi, > > The WGLC for -protocol-17 and -udp-07 documents will end later today. > Please review and comment on these documents today. > > David Harrington > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > _______________________________________________ > Syslog mailing list > [email protected] > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/syslog > _______________________________________________ Syslog mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/syslog
