I pushed the draft documentation for IUK to feature/incremental-upgrades-integration, see eee4313..5f3f56b.
The main course is: http://git.tails.boum.org/tails/tree/wiki/src/doc/first_steps/upgrade.mdwn?h=feature/incremental-upgrades-integration As always, think about the structure of the doc, the workflow, and the content first, then go into the phrasing if you want. I'll do the markup later on. I also had to propose several changes to the dialogs and error messages. So here they are. I hope it's clear which blob I'm referring to. I added some notes flagged XXX along the way. The title of the section should be the titles of the windows but I think that most of them were already ok. Not enough memory available --------------------------- *Not enough memory available to check for upgrades.* - Make sure this system satisfies the requirements for running Tails. See file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/about/requirements.en.html - Try to restart Tails and upgrade again. - Or do a manual upgrade. See https://tails.boum.org/doc/first_steps/upgrade#manual XXX: I get this error message when trying to do the upgrade from a VM with 1024MB. That's in contradiction with what is on the requirement page at the moment. Error while checking for upgrades --------------------------------- *Could not determine whether an upgrade is available from our website.* Check your network connection, and restart Tails to try upgrading again. If the problem persists, go to file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/check.en.html. *Debugging information* ... #1. Upgrade available --------------------- *You should upgrade to Tails 0.22.* For more information, go to https://tails.boum.org/news/version_0.22/. Note that: - It is recommended to close all the open applications during the upgrade. - Downloading the upgrade might take a long time, from several minutes to a few hours. - The networking will be disabled after downloading the upgrade. Download size: 201 MB Do you want to upgrade now? [Upgrade later] [Upgrade now] XXX: Round the download size. XXX: Use MB instead of MiB? XXX: The link shouldn't be clickable if you cannot click on it. People can do almost the same copy paste operation, or copy it manually. #1. New version available ------------------------- *You should manually upgrade to Tails 0.22.* For more information, go to https://tails.boum.org/news/version_0.22/. Note that it is not possible to do an automatic upgrade on your system. Automatic upgrades are only possible on a Tails device installed using Tails Installer. Download size: 916 MB Do you want to download the ISO image now? [Cancel] [Download] XXX: I get an error when clicking on "Download": (gksudo:4338): GLib-CRITICAL **: g_str_has_prefix: assertion `str != NULL' failed localuser:tails-upgrade-frontend being removed from access control list #2. Downloading upgrade ----------------------- Downloading the upgrade to Tails 0.22... XXX: Use "upgrade to" XXX: Don't use "please", as we are not to blame if the download is slow Error while downloading the upgrade ----------------------------------- *The upgrade could not be downloaded.* Check your network connection, and restart Tails to try upgrading again. If the problem persists, go to file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/download.en.html. *Debugging information* ... XXX: Does it make sense to add the URL in the debugging information as it might already be in the stderr? #3. Upgrading the system ------------------------ *Your Tails device is being upgraded...* For security reasons, the networking is now disabled. Error while installing the upgrade ---------------------------------- *An error occured while installing the upgrade.* Your Tails device needs to be repaired and might be unable to restart. Please follow the instructions at file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/install.en.html *Debugging information* ... #4. Restart Tails ----------------- *Your Tails device was successfully upgraded.* Some security features were temporarily disabled. You should restart Tails on the new version as soon as possible. Do you want to restart now? [Restart later] [Restart now]
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