[email protected] wrote (02 Jan 2014 15:02:51 GMT) : > intrigeri: >> First, I'm confused. You wanted me (with pretty good reasons) to >> rename "Tails Upgrader" to "Tails Incremental Upgrader", so I did that >> a few weeks ago (and, well, it was quite painful). And now the doc >> refers to "Tails Upgrader" everywhere. What's wrong?
> When I said that I thought the user would have to understand and decide > when to do a incremental upgrade and when to do a full upgrade. > But with the IUK being automatic, the user is now taken into the > incremental upgrade without having to take that decision or understand > the conceptual difference between both. The IUK is started > automatically, so that's what I called the "automatic upgrade", and if > this doesn't work, then you can do a "manual upgrade". And we avoid to > use "incremental" which is slightly more jargon. > I called "Tails Upgrader", the piece of software that leads you through > that process, to either do the upgrade or tell you that it is not > possible and you should do it manually. Totally makes sense. > I didn't think this was much work from you. I thought you basically > renamed the launcher (d54025d). And that I would adjust the > documentation and strings presented to the user. You are fully right, I was confusing this with the update -> upgrade rename (that one *was* painful). Reverted, pushing. >>> - If an error occurs while checking for available upgrades:<br/> >>> >>> [[file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/check.en.html|upgrade/error/check]] >>> - If an error occurs while download the upgrade:<br/> >>> >>> [[file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/download.en.html|upgrade/error/download]] >>> - If an error occurs while installing the upgrade:<br/> >>> >>> [[file:///usr/share/doc/tails/website/doc/upgrade/error/install.en.html|upgrade/error/install]] >> >> Links to file:///, really? This won't work for those who read this >> page online, outside of Tails. > I agree that looks a bit subversive but I had a rationale behind that. > We know that those pages are a bit special already: people are invited > to visit them from inside the error messages by typing the whole damn > URL in the browser. I wanted to allow people to reach them through the > doc as well, so they can consult them even without the error message in > front of their eyes. > I decided to use the same caption for those links that what the user > sees in the error message; which is the URL starting with file:///. (By > the way, I'd be curious to learn how many people know that a URL can > start with something else than http). But from the online website those > will point to the https:// pages as usually. It's only the caption that > has file:///. > Does that makes more sense somehow? OK, good. I missed the caption/target difference, sorry. >>> In that case, <span class="application">Tails Installer</span> allows you to >>> manually upgrade a USB stick or SD card to a newer version of Tails. >> >>> - [[Upgrade by cloning from another device|upgrade#clone]] which already >>> runs a newer version of Tails >>> - [[Upgrade from an ISO image|upgrade#from_iso]] of a newer version of >>> Tails >> >> Needs some linking words between the first sentence and the bullet >> list, maybe? > Fixed. bullet lists need to be introduced by a sentence ending with ':'. I like the new version. Cheers, -- intrigeri | GnuPG key @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/intrigeri.asc | OTR fingerprint @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/otr.asc _______________________________________________ tails-dev mailing list [email protected] https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev
