> *grimace* I understand now. I myself am mostly apathetic 
> about it, though I do
> prefer "displays". As Donna said, "appears" seems to be magical.
> 
> Anyhow, thanks for the info!
> 
> Best,
> ~Tarage
> 

As long as "displays" has an object it makes no difference, although we
found that it was clearer to readers (and to us) to say that a dialog box
opens and closes, rather than either of the choices you asked about. And
windows open and close; and a screen appears and displays content. And a
dialog box can show as well as display. Or it can present. The less the word
we use stands calls attention to itself, of course, the better. We figured
that people really needed to know what should happen after they followed a
step, so we told them this (buttons are bold):

Click Do It Now. The Do It Now dialog box opens and shows the settings for
doing it.  ....  Click OK.

Very frankly, appears and displays could well have never been in our manuals
at all. If you're documenting Windows applications, I would use the MMOS as
a general guide and develop your own *house style guide* for items that you
want to handle differently than MMOS does. It's not perfect, but its
handling of Windows elements is good, in my opinion.


Bonnie Granat
http://www.GranatEdit.com
 



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