On 8/2/07, Dori Green <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > "Wrote system specifications." -- "Designed and wrote new easy-to-use system > specifications documents that reduced help desk calls by 50%, a $40,000 > annual savings." > > Notice that the second version contains more words.
Just thinking out loud here, but maybe you could go with: "Reduced help desk calls by 50%, saving $40K annually." and leave it to them to ask you how. -- Milan Davidovic http://altmilan.blogspot.com http://www.terminus1525.ca/studio/view/2758 ______________________________________________ Author Help files and create printed documentation with Doc-To-Help. New release adds Team Authoring Support, enhanced Web-based help technology and PDF output. Learn more at www.doctohelp.com/tcp. Interactive 3D Documentation Parts catalogs, animated instructions, and more. www.i3deverywhere.com _______________________________________________ Technical Communication Professionals Post a message to the list: email [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subscribe, unsubscribe, archives, account options, list info: http://techcommpros.com/mailman/listinfo/tcp_techcommpros.com Subscribe (email): send a blank message to [EMAIL PROTECTED] Unsubscribe (email): send a blank message to [EMAIL PROTECTED] Need help? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED] Get the TCP whole experience! http://www.techcommpros.com
