On Sat, 12 Dec 2009 07:28:46 +0001, Jason McIntyre wrote:

>On Fri, Dec 11, 2009 at 09:56:16PM -0500, Brad Tilley wrote:
>> Index: kate.4
>> ===================================================================
>> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man4/kate.4,v
>> retrieving revision 1.1
>> diff -N -u -p kate.4
>> --- kate.4      27 Mar 2008 01:54:44 -0000      1.1
>> +++ kate.4      12 Dec 2009 02:49:24 -0000
>> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ temperature sensors in total.
>>  .Pp
>>  Since many prior revisions of the chips appear to have
>>  valid readings for at least some temperature sensors
>> -in the same address space as the abovementioned revisions,
>> +in the same address space as the above mentioned revisions,
>>  the driver may also attach on such older revisions provided
>>  that it finds some sensor readings that appear valid.
>>  However, in such cases
>
>this was probably meant to be "aforementioned".
>jmc
>
And you could take out all the agony by saying:
"in the same address space as the revisions mentioned above"
 Mind you, abovementioned is found in many dictionaries and some copy
editors insist on above-mentioned.

I prefer rearrangement for simplicity to remove irritation. ;)


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