On Fri, Sep 25, 2015 at 10:14:03PM BST, Rob Pierce wrote:

> Update diff below referencing the correct man page sections and with sentenced
> starting on a new line.

Hi Rob,

> Index: afterboot.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/afterboot.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.149
> diff -u -p -r1.149 afterboot.8
> --- afterboot.8       24 Sep 2015 15:07:55 -0000      1.149
> +++ afterboot.8       26 Sep 2015 02:23:33 -0000
> @@ -124,22 +124,30 @@ Furthermore, the superuser's
>  should never contain the current directory
>  .Pq Dq \&. .
>  .Ss System date
> -Check the system date with the
> +.Xr ntpd 8
> +is now enabled by default to automatically synchronize clocks with remote

If I may. I'd simply use what's already there with slight modification:

+is used to automatically synchronize clocks with remote NTP servers.

> +NTP servers.
> +You can use
> +.Xr ntpctl 8
> +to check the status.
> +You can also search
> +.Pa /var/log/daemon
> +for
> +.Xr ntpd 8
> +related events.
> +To change the time servers or other related settings see
> +.Xr ntpd.conf 5 .
> +.Pp

IMVHO, too much info about ntpd. These do not belong here at all - ntpd
"just works" and if one is to find out more about it - they should read
the aforementioned manual page.

> +You can check the system date using the
>  .Xr date 1
>  command.
> -If needed, change the date, and/or change the symbolic link of

This was fine as it is, with how to *change* the date example below.

> +If needed, change the symbolic link of
>  .Pa /etc/localtime
>  to the correct time zone in the
>  .Pa /usr/share/zoneinfo
>  directory.
> -Alternatively,
> -.Xr ntpd 8
> -can be used to automatically synchronize clocks with remote NTP servers.
> -.Pp
> -Examples:
>  .Pp
> -Set the current date to January 27th, 1999 3:04pm:
> -.Dl # date 199901271504
> +For example:
>  .Pp
>  Set the time zone to Atlantic Standard Time:
>  .Dl # ln -fs /usr/share/zoneinfo/Canada/Atlantic /etc/localtime

Regards,

Raf

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