Hi all,

Some explanation regarding the changes:

- might -> "needs to" - it has to be there, no "might" about it :^)
- I've added the additional httpd_flags example back - without it, the
  following sentence doesn't make sense. Alternatively the "As can be
  seen..." sentence can be removed entirely.
- even though "package" hadn't, most likely, been used literally the
  words means has a special meaning in OpenBSD, which may lead to some
  confusion
- since the DNS is being used in brackets, let's expand it properly
- named -> nsd has been missed when unbound's been added to the man page
- since eigrpd appeared recently, it's a good excuse to add it here
- "being running" doesn't sound good

Regards,

Raf

Index: share/man/man8/intro.8
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RCS file: /cvs/src/share/man/man8/intro.8,v
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -p -r1.26 intro.8
--- share/man/man8/intro.8      21 Sep 2015 09:23:35 -0000      1.26
+++ share/man/man8/intro.8      4 Nov 2015 02:23:45 -0000
@@ -90,11 +90,14 @@ file overrides variable assignments in
 .Xr rc.conf 8 .
 So to enable
 .Xr httpd 8 ,
-the following line might be added to
+the following line needs to be added to
 .Pa /etc/rc.conf.local :
 .Bd -literal -offset indent
 httpd_flags=""
 .Ed
+or
+.Bd -literal -offset indent -compact
+httpd_flags="-vv"
 .Pp
 As can be seen above,
 this method is also used to specify additional options.
@@ -106,7 +109,7 @@ and the individual pages for the utiliti
 .Ss Automounter daemon (amd)
 If using the
 .Xr amd 8
-package,
+daemon,
 go into the
 .Pa /etc/amd
 directory and set it up by
@@ -123,7 +126,7 @@ variables:
 .Va amd_flags
 and
 .Va amd_master .
-.Ss Domain Name Server (DNS)
+.Ss Domain Name System (DNS)
 If you are using a name server, check the
 .Pa /etc/resolv.conf
 file.
@@ -141,7 +144,7 @@ If using a caching name server, add the 
 Relevant
 .Xr rc.conf 8
 variables:
-.Va named_flags
+.Va nsd_flags
 and
 .Va unbound_flags .
 .Ss Clock synchronisation
@@ -224,6 +227,7 @@ variables:
 .Ss Routing Daemons
 Various daemons for managing routing tables are available:
 .Xr bgpd 8 ,
+.Xr eigrpd 8 ,
 .Xr ospfd 8 ,
 and
 .Xr ripd 8 .
@@ -232,13 +236,14 @@ Relevant
 .Xr rc.conf 8
 variables:
 .Va bgpd_flags ,
+.Va eigrpd_flags ,
 .Va ospfd_flags ,
 and
 .Va ripd_flags .
 .Ss RPC-based network services
 Several services depend on the RPC portmapper,
 .Xr portmap 8 ,
-being running for proper operation.
+running, for proper operation.
 This includes YP and NFS exports, among other services.
 .Pp
 Relevant

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