Hi, Some suggestions on how to improve the dhclient.conf(5) manual: - Shorten initial description, inspired by httpd.conf(5).
- No need to mention the choice of parser implementation (recursive descent). - Do not use the word `end` twice in the sentence on comments, instead borrow a sentence from doas.conf(5). Comments? OK? Index: dhclient.conf.5 =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/dhclient/dhclient.conf.5,v retrieving revision 1.34 diff -u -p -r1.34 dhclient.conf.5 --- dhclient.conf.5 1 Sep 2016 20:06:52 -0000 1.34 +++ dhclient.conf.5 31 Jul 2017 06:32:28 -0000 @@ -43,22 +43,19 @@ .Nm dhclient.conf .Nd DHCP client configuration file .Sh DESCRIPTION -The .Nm -file contains configuration information for +is the configuration file for .Xr dhclient 8 . .Pp The .Nm -file is a free-form ASCII text file. -It is parsed by the recursive-descent parser built into -.Xr dhclient 8 . -The file may contain extra tabs and newlines for formatting purposes. +file is a free-form ASCII text file that may contain extra tabs and newlines for +formatting purposes. Keywords in the file are case-insensitive. Comments may be placed anywhere within the file (except within quotes). Comments begin with the .Sq # -character and end at the end of the line. +character and extend to the end of current the line. .Pp The .Nm
