On Mon, Jul 31, 2017 at 08:34:02AM +0200, Anton Lindqvist wrote: > Hi, > Some suggestions on how to improve the dhclient.conf(5) manual: > > - Shorten initial description, inspired by httpd.conf(5). > > - No need to mention the choice of parser implementation (recursive > descent). > > - Do not use the word `end` twice in the sentence on comments, instead > borrow a sentence from doas.conf(5). > > Comments? OK? >
yes, but one comment inline, and please wait for ken to look it over. > Index: dhclient.conf.5 > =================================================================== > RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/dhclient/dhclient.conf.5,v > retrieving revision 1.34 > diff -u -p -r1.34 dhclient.conf.5 > --- dhclient.conf.5 1 Sep 2016 20:06:52 -0000 1.34 > +++ dhclient.conf.5 31 Jul 2017 06:32:28 -0000 > @@ -43,22 +43,19 @@ > .Nm dhclient.conf > .Nd DHCP client configuration file > .Sh DESCRIPTION > -The > .Nm > -file contains configuration information for > +is the configuration file for > .Xr dhclient 8 . > .Pp > The > .Nm > -file is a free-form ASCII text file. > -It is parsed by the recursive-descent parser built into > -.Xr dhclient 8 . > -The file may contain extra tabs and newlines for formatting purposes. > +file is a free-form ASCII text file that may contain extra tabs and newlines > for > +formatting purposes. > Keywords in the file are case-insensitive. > Comments may be placed anywhere within the file (except within quotes). > Comments begin with the > .Sq # > -character and end at the end of the line. > +character and extend to the end of current the line. s/current the/the current/ ;) jmc > .Pp > The > .Nm >
