On Tue, Oct 02, 2018 at 08:26:02PM +0200, Denis Fondras wrote:
> Reorder text and be more precise.
> 
> Index: bgpd.conf.5
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/bgpd/bgpd.conf.5,v
> retrieving revision 1.178
> diff -u -p -r1.178 bgpd.conf.5
> --- bgpd.conf.5       9 Sep 2018 17:11:26 -0000       1.178
> +++ bgpd.conf.5       2 Oct 2018 18:25:17 -0000
> @@ -445,6 +445,21 @@ The default is
>  .Ic ignore .
>  .Pp
>  .It Xo
> +.Ic roa-set
> +.Ic { Ar address Ns Li / Ns Ar len Ic maxlen Ar len Ic source-as Ar asn ... 
> Ic }
> +.Xc
> +A
> +.Ic roa-set
> +holds a collection of Validated ROA Payload (VRP).

hi.

i'm unsure about the terminology exactly. but can you have a "collection
of <type> payload"? doesn;t it have to be "payload data" or something?

i think at least it needs to be plural (payloads). like, you wouldn;t
have a collection of bent umbrella. er, that's as an example..

or you could remove "collection of".

jmc

> +Each received prefix is checked against the
> +.Ic roa-set
> +and the Origin Validation Status (OVS) is set.
> +.Bd -literal -offset indent
> +roa-set { 192.0.2.0/24 maxlen 24 source-as 64511
> +          203.0.113.0/24 source-as 64496 }
> +.Ed
> +.Pp
> +.It Xo
>  .Ic route-collector
>  .Pq Ic yes Ns | Ns Ic no
>  .Xc
> @@ -1386,6 +1401,14 @@ can be set to
>  in which case the nexthop is compared against the address of the neighbor.
>  Nexthop filtering is not supported on locally announced networks and one must
>  take into consideration previous rules overwriting nexthops.
> +.Pp
> +.It Xo
> +.Ic ovs
> +.Pq Ic valid | not-found | invalid
> +.Xc
> +This rule applies only to
> +.Em UPDATES
> +where the Origin Validation Status (OVS) matches.
>  .Pp
>  .It Ic prefix Ar address Ns Li / Ns Ar len
>  .It Ic prefix Ar address Ns Li / Ns Ar len Ic prefixlen Ar range
> 

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