On Wednesday, September 2, 2015 at 9:53:24 AM UTC+2, Birthe C wrote: > > http://showroom.tiddlyspot.com is for creating slideshows, using BJ's > taglist plugin to sort the slides. > > Please excuse me for the used example. > Mats suggestions to find new users and the word teasing, made me do this > show titled "TW to lure the hussars into using TW ;-)" >
Hi Birthe, I love this "comic" style of a presentation. It's a great intro! Some ideas: - For a new user it may not be obvious, that there is a "-> next" button on the bottom right corner. So the first arrow should be more visible. - The font may be a little bit bigger. - The sentences are too long. eg: "Don't just stand there staring at me, "come on in"....I'm sure you want to know a little more, and try your hands at some tiddler fiddling. " could be - Don't just stand there staring at me, "come on in"! <- come on in ... may be green. and a link to the next page. - I'm sure you want to know a little more - try your hands at some tiddler fiddling. page: My bowl "that the official TiddlyWiki mascot is:" may be "that the official TiddlyWiki mascot is *Jack*:" The font size here is good. may be the whole TW should have this size. ... switching size in the middle of a presentation shouldn't happen. page: Recognise another TW user hmmm, imo this text be improved, with some positive rephrasing. page: This Site Uses TiddlyWiki The end ... Instead of "the end" there should be a "call to action" link. eg: - download this TW ... or - go to tiddlywiki.com or - have a look at a second "intro" (same style) - ... <you name it> have fun! mario -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TiddlyWiki" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/tiddlywiki. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/tiddlywiki/0804eb78-4ac9-4012-9393-29be75f2b58e%40googlegroups.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
