Thank you for your review and to Stephen for making the speedy updates. Best regards, Kathleen
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 9:28 AM Stephen Farrell <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hiya, > > On 19/01/2021 10:23, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker wrote: > > Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11: Yes > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Thank you for the work put into this document. > > > > Special thanks to the shepherd, Sean Turner, who did a great job to > describe > > the WG consensus. Rob Wilton's point about minimum version is also > important > > and should be addressed in the abstract (even if the text is clearer in > section > > 1). > > > > Please find below some nits. > > > > I hope that this helps to improve the document, > > > > Regards, > > > > -éric > > > > -- Abstract -- > > "This document, if approved, formally deprecates Transport Layer" => > should ", > > if approved," be removed now from the abstract? The RFC Editor will > probably do > > it though. > > Yep, that's standard fare so fine to leave as-is since the > RFC folks know what to do there already. > > > > > -- Section 1 -- > > "deprecate these old versions." should the "these old version" be > followed by > > the enumeration ? > > Fair enough. I guess that snippet in isolation could be > ambiguous. Also fixed in repo - [1] with diff vs. -11 > at [2] > > Cheers, > S. > > [1] > > https://github.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/blob/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt > [2] > > https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-11.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tlswg/oldversions-deprecate/master/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate.txt > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > TLS mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls > > > -- Best regards, Kathleen
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