I am commenting on 8447bis. This document is just about ready to move forward,
but two fixes are needed.
Why there are Notes still in the doc (e.g., near end of section 6 it says about
weaker elliptic curves) and think those should be resolved, one way or another,
before advancing out of the WG.
Sec 7 adds a note that says the experts "will highly encourage registrants to
provide a link" while Sec 13 says experts "ensure the specification is publicly
available." So is that SHOULD or MUST? (And s/highly/strongly/ IMO)
A nit, this line appears multiple times:
Setting a "Recommended" column value to Y or D requires Standards
There should probably be quotes around the letters Y and D, for consistency
with other text.
A post IETF 116 bump to make sure folks get their reviews in. If you look at
the diffs from RFC 8446 you can see not that much has changed. We will also
take “I read it and it looks good” response.
Cheers,
spt
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