Paul:

> The draft looks mostly okay. It should fix a few small issues:
> 
> The document needs to Obsolete: 8773

Indeed.  Fixed.

> Please also mark this so in the datatracker, so reviews can more easily diff 
> 8773 against the latest 8773bis draft.

I do not think this is something that I can do as document Author.  Can the TLS 
WG chairs do it?

> Add a note in the Abstract that this raises the Document Status from 
> Experimental RFC to Standards Track RFC

I suggest: "This Standards Track RFC (once approved) obsoletes RFC 8773, which 
was an Experimental RFC."

> The reference draft-hoffman-c2pq is oudated. Change this to 
> draft-ietf-pquip-pqc-engineers.

Updated the reference.

> Update all references of RFC8446 to 8446bis (section 4.3.2 stayed the same,
> but Appendix E.6 of [RFC8446] becomes Appendix F.6 of [RFC8446])

Fixed.

> Once this is done, I will issue the IETF LC.

Draft -09 was just posted.  
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-8773bis/

Russ

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